The Crystal Empire has returned. An old tyrant has returned with it. The princess takes immediate action and reassembles the Equestrian Army but with more ponies; confident, foolish ponies.
Rainbow Dash, a mere citizen from Equestria, is one of among 1000 soldiers in the army. She is determined to win this battle, not only wanting to defeat the king, but to help the empire. She befriends ponies along the way to help her achieve her goal, but it gets harder within each step. Ponies she knew and loved were falling. All hope is lost. Trusts are broken.
I mean, whatever it takes to win. Right?
Right...?
Excellent story keep up the good work.
And I give this story a 10 out of 20 score
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thank you for the feedback and favourite! i appreciate it :))
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As you make more stores I will score them with a 10 or a 200 .
And I'm going to help you make more stores by giving you idears for storys
I like these types of adventure, more attractive is the plot around re venge io adds drama, I appreciate.
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sequel coming soon ;))