• Published 31st May 2021
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A Lost Heir: Rainbow Rocks - WildWPony



Tirek and Discord has been defeated, slavery has been outlawed, and now he's married to Princess Angelfeather. As he deals with being a new father and the pregnancy of both Angelfeather and Philomena, he also has to deal with Sunset Shimmer.

Comments ( 19 )

Ok wow. Now that was an amazing set of Finale Chapters. I'm surprised but glad you killed off Adagio but not Sonata or Aria. I really loved this sequel to The Lost Heir. Hey WildWPony, I know this isn't something you want hear, but is there going to be a continuation of this story or is this the very end? I ask because in the first Lost Heir story, you left it kind of on a cliffhanger. I can't wait to see more great stories and chapters written by you in the future. Good luck and keep up the great work.

I enjoyed this story

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Thank you, very much. To answer your question: This is the very end. And there's some reasons for this. This story just started off as an idea, as with any story, with no real storyline behind it. Not until that fateful day that I lost about three months worth of writing and permanently lost a bunch of chapters. But it was a blessing in disguise because while I was upset and frustrated, I got the idea behind tackling the sore subject of slavery. Through this story, I wanted the readers to understand certain ideas. That while slavery is wrong, the reason it's wrong is because there is only one true race and that is Mankind. We are all inherently equal. As Shakespeare asked, "If you prick us, do we not bleed? if you tickle us, do we not laugh? if you poison us, do we not die? and if you wrong us, shall we not revenge?"--The Merchant of Venice Act 3 Scene 1. Another idea is that our rights do not come from man. If our rights came from man then slavery would be morally just and it's not. "We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness."--Declaration of Independence. Our rights come from nature, not man and they don't come from the constitution. The Constitution is supposed to protect our rights, not give us our rights. Our right to "Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Happiness" comes from nature, not man. That's why we all are inherently equal to begin with. And just because a law is the law of the land doesn't mean it's a just law and should be obeyed either.

But I'll get off my soapbox. I wanted this story to not only be fun but to show certain ideas behind the basics of human rights. And I think I've done that. So, with those thoughts behind the story, I just don't see the need to continue the story from this point. So, maybe I can tackle some other hard-hitting subjects through other stories.

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I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.

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Ok. Well, it's been nice reading this story and it's prequel. Also, like I said before, I can't wait to see what other stories you have planned to write and what possibly crazy adventures you have planned for the characters. Good luck with your work and stay safe!

I wonder, will there be one for starlight glimmer?

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Will there be one what for Starlight Glimmer?

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Story, i know twilight and her friends stop her with our town then she goes and screws with time itself. Unless you decide to omitted that because to me time travel is screwy and annoying.

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Oh, no I'm not planning on doing anything else regarding this story.

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I figured but loved the story anyways. Feels like a story you can re-read it alot not get boring. then again i do forget things alot.

Edit:(Hate auto-correct)

11084414
After reading your story it’s ending feels like a cliffhanger, where it could end there or continue on……and while ending there would feel like there is potential lost, it’s still a goood story

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Yeah, it is. And while I'm not planning on doing anything else with this story. That doesn't mean that I won't either. I know that I'm not being clear but there's a reason for that. I'll put up a blog post in the coming months about the future of this story and that of Ninetales.

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ok but when you are done with your Ninetails stories. I hope to see an update to whether or not you will start the next sequel to this story.

Also I would love to see if Sonata will ever become another mother to Fred's herd with a pony\human\siren hybrid from Fred's Alicorn status just like Fluttershy is a mother to his first foal.
Though from how this story is going i expect more females will be impregnated by him. Plus because of the bond the humans and their Equestrain conterparts now share i expect that they are even more susceptible to Fred's pony dna to make impregnation way more likely

Quick question after reading through the story is Sonata part of his herd now or some thing

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At that point in time, not officially.

This has been intense but one of the best stories i have read

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Thank you very much. That means a lot to me when my readers enjoy one of my stories.

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Looking forward to seeing more

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