TAF: On Shed-Ule / Scrambled Eggs / Smokescreen

by Lawton

Smokescreen

One morning,Rainbow Dash was filling Gordon’s tender with coal.Fluttershy noticed that Rainbow Dash was filling with a ton of coal

“Whoa,Rainbow Dash,I think that enough coal!” She gasped.

“Come on.If a little is good,A lot will be better.” Said Rainbow Dash filling the tender with a little more coal before jumping into Gordon’s cab.

“Who knows what’ll happen with all that coal.” Said Fluttershy.

“No sweat.” Said Rainbow Dash.”With this much,We can get the express across the island lickity split.”

“You said it.” Said Gordon before puffing away.

“Oh boy.They’ll be in trouble.” Said Henry.

“You can say that again.” Said Fluttershy.Gordon steamed down the track and up Gordon’s hill.

“Let’s keep it up.” Said Rainbow Dash before hacking the schedule.”The station we need to stop at is just ahead of the one we’re about to pass.Those passengers are waiting for Rarity and James.”

“I see them right ahead.” Said Gordon.Suddenly,He felt a twitch in his funnel.

“What’s wrong?” Rainbow Dash asked.As Gordon steamed through the station,He let out a huge sneeze!

“AAAAACHOOOOOOOOO!”Gordon blew tons of coal dust out of his funnel and firebox.The people waiting for Fluttershy and Henry are covered from head to toe in coal dust as Gordon zoomed away.Rainbow Dash was covered in coal dust,Too.

“There’s something you don’t see everyday.” Coughed Rainbow Dash.

“Ya think?” Sniffed Gordon.Later,They met Boco at Wellsworth station.

“Is something wrong,Gordon?” He asked.”I think you’ve got some bad coal in your firebox.”

“It’s nothing.My firebox is as clean as a bell.” Said Gordon.As the last of the passengers got on,Gordon left before letting out another huge sneeze.Coal dust flew all over Boco.Rainbow Dash was confused.

“What kind of coal is this,Anyhow?” She asked as she flew to Gordon’s funnel.But,When she looked inside the funnel,Gordon sneezed again covering Rainbow Dash with even more coal dust.”Now,I know what burnt toast feels like.”Sir Tophom Hatt heard what happened and are to see Rainbow Dash and Gordon at Knapford station when they arrived.

“Are you ok?” He said.

“I don’t know.” Sniffed Gordon.”I was puffing through Edwards station.And the next thing,....Agh.....Agh....Aaaaagh!”

“Take cover!” Yelled Rainbow Dash as she hit behind Rarity and James who had just arrived.

“AAAAAAAACHOOOOO!” Gordon sneezed and filled the whole station.Everyone was covered in coal dust including Rarity and James.They were cross.

“What do you have to say for yourself?” Rarity asked angrily.

“Whoops.” Chuckled Rainbow Dash.Soon,Rainbow Dash took Gordon to a siding and tried to clean his funnel with a brush.”Wow.There’s a ton of coal dust in here.”

Comments

[Lawton]

10784160 something like that.I’m sure the story will be completely filled soon.

[Fireheart 1945]

Um, sorry to complain (I love Thomas, especially the original models), but the words are almost all clumped together without spaces. I apologize, but this makes it really hard to read.

[The Blue EM2]

10784188
I see.

[The Blue EM2]

10784855
This author is in need of a proofreader.