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Lawton


I Am A Great Story Writer. You Name It, I Make It!

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This story is a sequel to TAF: On Shed-Ule / Scrambled Eggs / Smokescreen


Thomas had an accident at the station masters house. He was having breakfast with his kids. But, Thanks to Thomas, they had an unexpected guest. When help came, Thomas was out of the house. But, His front is badly damaged.


With Thomas at the Steamworks, A new diesel rail car named Daisy came to take Thomas’ place until he is fixed. However, she began being rude o Twilight and her friends.

Since Daisy hates pulling trucks as much as James and Gordon, Spike and Percy lost patience and decided to do Toby’s work while he delivers the milk.

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Comments ( 4 )

You may want to reword the first paragraph of the description. The current wording implies Thomas is the one having the breakfast, not the station master.

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But Thomas is a train and he cant eat food. He only needs coal and water. Remember?

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You've missed the point. I know Thomas doesn't require food. But the way the paragraph has been phrased implies he is the one having it.

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Oh! I see it now! When Thomas hit the house, he got some breakfast food all over him. Ill add that soon.

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