Why do things move on? Why do things have a end? Can't things last forever? Friends are friends forever, even after you die. They'll always be watching, no matter where they are.
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'Dear' is misspelled in your image.
Don't let the downvotes get you down. I feel it's rather well-written with just a couple of errors. "Week" should be "weak" as one when it was Twilight sending the letter. Keep up the good work!
Deer Princess
It's weirdly written, but I like it, and it has potential
I like it but needs a little more fleshing out. Keep up the good work my friend. The ending at first had me all like this
but then I realized twilight was where she wanted to be in then end so I was all like this 
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I gotta say, I agree. I think this story has potential, but you let it die by writing so little... You should have written a 10k word story instead, with the same story. Because this deserves a lot more elaboration than what it got so far. I am not flaming or anything. Just giving you my opinion.
This is very oddly written, but no offense should be taken when I say this, because I think this has potential. I also think this could just be expanded very slightly. With only a thousand words, it's very condensed, and it almost seems a bit rushed because we don't have enough time. But believe me when I say I didn't hate it; I just believe it could have had an added amount of words to add more emotion and tension into it.
Though it was oddly written, it was utterly beautiful. Im still a bit confused as to why Twilight passed away when she did, but at the least she passed peacefully.