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PegPony


I like writing stories but I'm also a kinky fetishistic loser, that's all you need to know really.

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Good story and hilarious to boot.

Both of them live over a bakery and neither one of them thought to go downstairs and use shortening or cooking oil.

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I'm glad you liked it! I did want to add a comedy element to this story, so I'm glad you found it funny :) I did briefly consider the fact that if they wanted to, they could easily have made a quick trip to retrieve some cooking oil as lubricant, but then where would the story be? :P

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I took it as mild panic caused them to forget.

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Take it whatever way you like! It's up for interpretation as to why they didn't think about using oil :)

Pinkie Pie giggled "Well, an employee has got to keep her boss happy! Especially with her husband often travelling to new lands to see if he can find any new recipes for Sugar Cube Corner, sure he comes back with plenty of ideas, but how can he not see that Mrs.Cake is a woman with a body that demands attention?"

If he one day comes back with an army of little men. I'm gonna lose it:rainbowlaugh:

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That would be a hilarious concept! Unfortunately it's not really something I intend to do, sorry! :P

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I'm not asking for you to do it. It just seemed like you were referencing that from the movie; only the mentioning of Wonka traveling the world to look for ingredients for his candy.

It was the first thing that popped into my head when I first read that line

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Actually I wasn't referencing it at all but I still think that it's a funny concept! I know you weren't specifically asking me to write it, I just thought I'd mention it because even though I do take requests, I reserve the right to say "no" to them and a Willy Wonka inspired comedy story is, believe it or not, just a tad too silly for me! Regardless, I'm glad you enjoyed the story and found it funny, so long as you enjoyed it, I'm happy :)

Pinkie Pie got out of bed, her hair slightly frazzled and she was incredibly tired. Suddenly the light came on and she shielded her eyes, not quite ready to be so suddenly awake, it was only when she saw who had switched the lights on that she recollected where she was and how she had got there. "Well, look who decided to wake up" said Applejack, standing in the doorway next to Fluttershy "You doin' alright sugar cube? Chester did a real number on you this time around, I don't know how you keep up".

Chester! Probably shouldn't have wasted that time on my "goodbye FGTBFG" comment.

That was when Pinkie Pie decided to be a stupid bitch and say "Are we living on a prayer?"

Take her hand! You'll make it, I swear!

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Nonsense! It was a lovely comment, true the FGTBFG (now just the FG/AC universe) series is over, but there will be other stories that continue to take place in that world.

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