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Well if it’s just paragraph breaking down not to bad then.
Only major typos are the “s’ “, “s” and “ ‘s “ for plurals then? Might have been right and should’ve ignore the auto correct format that kept changing those during edits

Honestly tried something slightly different in this story and not sure it works to well.... multi ponies of 5+ seems to be my limit of having them all in at once in a signal chapter, unlike the previous story that separates better I think, so need to sit on the next a-bit longer.

Attempt #2 going try mixing in magic in Canterlot