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Good stuff, mate, though you may need to read over it again. I read a few phrases that didn’t quite make sense. I’d put ‘em here, but I’m on mobile and mobile teens too mess it up.
All in all, good stuff - especially Dashie’s concern for Twi, real character there.

I'm convinced superfun is responsible for half the porn on this site :derpytongue2:

This was nicely written! Twilight is such a subservient little slut :twilightsheepish: Glad there was none of that 'mistress' nonsense. They both know well enough who the big spoon is without Twilight having to bleat it out every five seconds :twilightsmile:

SLZ

Rainbow really knows how to rock Twilight’s world.

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