In an Alternate version of Equestria, the battle against storm king is a bit like ww2 pacific. Sky Beak is the captain of the Jolly Rogers, during one of his missions, something happened to him which caused him to quit. Years later, his son Terramar wanted to follow his footstep to become a naval pilot. Sky beak soon became concerned about his son's ultimate fate of dying on the battlefield. Can father love change Terramar's mind?
(Inspired by Disney's Planes: Skipper's Story; I don't own either of them)
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I am not a good writer, despite English being my first language. Nor a good editor or critiquer, etc. So besides saying to improve some spelling mistakes, I can only say that I like the story. I haven’t read that much about hippogriphs and such, so this was a nice read. As for a sequel, if you’re feeling up to it, maybe you could write about more Terramar in the navy.
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Thank for the comment. Though.
And yes, next story would be about Terramar and his military career.
awesome story mate it remind my of my dad and me i cant wait for the next story
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Glad you liked it, heads up for the sequel! ;)
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Thanks for the fast reply, I am new here so I was wondering how this whole comment thing went down.
Planes is one of my favourite Pixar movies, especially / mostly because of the lesson it gives out
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It's fine, if you need any help I'm here bud.
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It's my favourite too.
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Thanks again, rn I’m busy but good to see that I have someone that can help me here!
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Your most welcomed.
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Thx! It was inspired by the movie! I love the movie and the ost.