A Kitsune swordman wondering around Equestrian and beyond, having much tales to tell...
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awesome chapter mate keep it up
the queen have a future husband in mind keep it up mate
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Correct
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Never mind, The Mirage is deigned and in progress, it would most likely appear around Chapter 4 or 5. The Rafale is coming too.
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And since Lance in this alternate universe is an ex -engineer, he'll design many awesome jets, for example a Raptor, but that kinds of jets won't show up until a VERY long time later.
AWESOME CHAPTER MATE KEEP IT UP Kingdom Hearts HD 2.5 ReMIX -Kairi- Extended when lance look at chrysalis for a moment this tune came to mind sora once said the true nature of the heart is to never ever let go
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Perfect match
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
all of them is my favorite
awesome chapter cant wait for the battle in the sky
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Glad you're enjoying it. :)
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Thanks!
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Thx! Get your hooves ready for an intense air combat!
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Don't have to ask me twice! I'm reading it now!
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Every single chapters were very good đź‘Ť
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
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Okay! On my way!by the way, how's your reaction to this chpater?
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I think The Twilight x Twilight relationship is starting to grow. You know there's a saying that some relationship start out hard; like how my parents met.
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awesome chapter mate cant wait for the next chapter and the gala
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I thought about it and found that the Mirage Rafale chapter is getting forgotten, so... So sorry, but I'm afraid the Gala is... Cancelled, because I've been receiving PMs about getting the Mirage and Rafale part to show up.
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that alright maybe another time
Quick slash killed by a red wing tips and 13 number on Aircraft? Is the Flanker Ace will be called red 13 and the squadron called red Squadron or something like Sol (sun) but different language.
but the Skull paint tell differently
awesome chapter mate keep it up nice ace combat reference cant wait for the next chapter
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awesome chapter mate keep it up nice kingdom hearts reference i cant wait for the next chapter im happy that lance and his sweetheart are going to be parents
One how the fuck dose he know bout discord and two when the fuck did he meet fluttershy?! The start of this chapter makes no sense and has me so confused like what?! First of all this is an AU of the main story this is off of and retreading the first and second chapter says no where did he meet fluttershy nor have any knowledge of discord and equestria it’s self it hurts trying to wrap my hand around this and one last thing why the hell did chryssi freak the fuck out when he left on a “mission” without telling her when they literally JUST MET?! I get the love at first site thing your going for but no where did they get together tell after that to make her freak out like a concerned girlfriend or marefriend in this case. There is so many loop holes in this polt it hurts trying to make it work in my mind to make sense. I ask please go back and make it somewhat more comprehensive.
Now other then that it’s fairly good and the plot it’s self is nice to see as it goes back to the roots of me getting into fimfiction of HiE and WW2/futuristic technology plots so if ya can make it work more better and more comprehensive it’ll be fairly golden.
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Haha, I gotta admit, I was confused by my own reading as well when looking back now, but I don't want to make significant changes so yea... Just stick with it.