Spitfire is the captain if the wonderbolts,
But was it always going to be this way? What if her decisions were changed? and how did she come choose this path in life?
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This is a story about spitfire and what led her to become a wonderbolt.
Its when spitfire feels down the truth is revealed about her, that under that hard exterior is a broken frame of a mare.
What will her team do to hopefully fix this?
Story has the tag violence which is shown in chapter 3
Chapters (7)
Surprise, Shut Up.
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Well surprise sometimes likes to point out the obvious to a big marshmallow like soarin
If she didn’t have a dad, how else would she be born?
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Its because her father abandoned her mother while she was pregnant with spitfire. So spitfire never knew her dad only ever knowing her step father as a dad.
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Oh, the way she said it made it sound like she never had one.
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Yeah i haddent realised that sorry
Moreeeeeeeeeeee
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Hello ill try get more done soon ive unfortunately been busy with exams which will decide the rest of my life and i hit righters block so once thats over ill have another chapter out I promise
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Yayyyy ty
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No problem ill try get the next chapter out in a few hours as i have some free time but it may not be as. Long as usual
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There we go next chapters is out
Are they her step-siblings? Also, did stellar ever find out about any of this?
Biological or step?
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Her mother always reffered to stellar and cosmos as her half siblings although they have no biological relation to spitfire
Boath the young unicorns dont like spitfire so never complained about how there father treated her
As for fathers spitfire never met and never will meet her actual dad as he passed away before she was born.
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I meant to ask did her mother ever find out?
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You will have to keep reading to find out
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Also, were her step-siblings born before she was?
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Yes they were brought into the family via marriage
Aww. Poor Spitty. Can’t wait to read more! Stories going great so far
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Thank you ❤️
I have some chapters ready to post im just making a bunch before I began to post them
Unless you want me to post as i go (probably multiple chapters a day)
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I don’t mind what you do. Whatever you prefer I’ll be happy with, lovin the story so far!
Wait, so does her uniform have holes for her wings or not?
You’d think that her mother would put the pieces together.
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Only the shirt has holes not the blazer
And youll find out later on
I can’t wait for the next. We’re really getting to see how Spitfire’s childhood was, and I’m exited to see what happens next
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Awe thank you
Its nice to get positive feedback currently the next chapter is in progress as well as a new story cux i be having to many ideas lol
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Aw, can’t wait to see what’s next. Keep up the good work!
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Thank you
I hope this story hasn’t been forgotten about
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It hasn’t im just going through alot of stress because of school ending me having to apply to college a new lockdown has hit and so on when I physically have time im doing housework but i am trying to make time for the story
1. Isn’t spitfire mustard yellow?
2. Why can’t she fly?
3. Why is she meeting them outside the hospital?
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Oh I’m sorry to hear that. Take all the time you need! Times are tough so I understand, I hope your okay
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Personally her coat is more of a golden yellow
Where i am mustard yellow is more dull and earthy
You will find out why she cant fly later in the story
I ment town hall that was auto correct sorry
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Im alright thanks for understanding
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Ohh
*Cries virtually*
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Oh god I totally forgot about this story
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Though so, that’s why I gave you a little hint 🤣
Did what?
Cool. Can’t wait.