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Akataja
Just one of many MLP Fans out there :) also german writer, taking small commissions for stories and art
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Why would Fluttershy clop to an apple?
Well, that was...
Ok, I'll give this story credit for being the best so far in integrating clop. That was decently handled. The problem was that I wasn't afraid. I wasn't scared for Fluttershy or anything around her.
Now you could have had a stranger give her the apples, changing her before leading her away like some thoughtless animal. Or you could have had her clopping to the apple like in the Exorcist. This story just needed something more like that
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ah yes, any "real scary" part would come later :D right now it is just a Halloween Story because of the Vampony-Thema ^^
Interesting, but the abbreviating Fluttershy to Shy is really annoying since it's not done during dialog.
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you are totally right, I am still working on my skills and I am thankful for any useful critics :)
apples
There are no members of the Apple family in this fic, for which I am grateful since Big Mac is already married and this isn't an AU.
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maybe this is a well-hidden hint/easter egg for the next chapter? .... or is just made an error because in german we woudl write it with "A" and not "a" :D