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Onyx Glitch


Little is known of what lays beyond the land of Equestria. Tales of wondrous endless lands of odd peculiarities, others of horrific lands that would drive even the strongest of stallions mad. Not much is known of these lands, but one thing is for certain... those who enter never return and by if some miracle they do, they are never the same.

After the events of first arriving Twilight finds herself in a dark and twisted version of the previous land.

(Don't you just love my ability to post a description that leaves you confused.)

This is the second installment of my 'My Little Ponycraft Saga' thing you should probably check out the first part here This Land

Yay! Horrible MS Paint cover pic by yours truly.

Be prepared for bad grammar and punctuation, i'm not the best writer. But hey if you wish to edit it there are instructions on how to edit along with my emails on my user page

Chapters (19)
Comments ( 77 )

Author's Note for Prologue

:twilightsheepish: SEQUEL TIME!

~Mister Mikey

Author's Note for Day 34

:twilightsheepish: Howdy guys, just dropping a little notice on this chapter/day/page thing, the links were originally gonna be the images posted in the story, but FiM for some reason wont allow the pictures to show...dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png oh well sorry to say, but you'll have to settle for the next best thing. Please forgive me.

~Mister Mikey

1243041 on the cover? yes, i am not the best artist, especially when its on the computer.

That's actually pretty good for MS paint.

I'm liking so far:rainbowkiss:

1243082 Awesome. I'm not a great artist either, online or not.

1243433 :twilightsmile: Thank you... unfortunately nothing is every as good as the first. But hey at least i can say i'm trying.:derpytongue2:

Liking this so far :twilightsmile: I suggest longer chapters.

Liking this so far :twilightsmile: I suggest longer chapters.

1243641 Thank you.
You and everyone has suggested that, im sorry that you are disappointed with the pages lengths, but sometimes i tend to go back and add some stuff here and there.

Hmm. Little too hasty there, and prologue needs work as well. But IM sure it will shape up... right?

I think i see where this is going. Ya need work with commas, intro sentence didn't flow. Still, keep going.

Well, your first one was great, I hope this one lives up to it.

Who is this stalker you speak of?!
I think I know...
Well, only one way to find out!

These new developments, they frighten me.
However, I think I know who this person is.

1245647 yeah me too, but sequels tend to not be as good as the first... on any note though, even if this one doesn't live up to expectation i'm still intending to finish all parts dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png

Author's Note for Day 38?

:twilightoops: Did i... i think i just did, i made a reference within a reference. Sweet unmerciful Celestia have mercy on me, for i have referenced SHED.mov within a reference of Slender

Also if you haven't figured it out already, each of the signs Twilight is finding are symbolic to something. internet muffin to whoever knows what each one is symbolic to

~Mister Mikey

This story. It makes me smile with happiness. Looking forward to more my good sir! Excellent job! Take my thumbs and these :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: :twilightsmile:

Twilight there another wrong with cube suns there beautiful in there own way.

Now it sounds like slender man twilight is screwed

Yes I was right its SHED.mov and a slender reference I'm going to give myself a cookie

1246960 It's not that the sequel isn't as good as the original, it's that everyone measures the sequel using the original as reference.

1247834 it just felt right to add a SHED.mov ref... for some reason

Hmmm maybe Applejack wrote that somehow?:rainbowhuh:

Love the Aether ref:rainbowkiss:

MORE. MORE. MORE. MORE. Moooooooooooooooooooore! :fluttercry: NOW! :flutterrage::twilightangry2:

ironically, that has to be one of the best MS paint pictures I've ever seen/

1259887 :fluttercry: i... i feel so love :heart: ... thank you!

I'm confused, does she or does she not have her horn right now? I would say no, but an earlier chapter makes me think she might.

He? Well, it is clearly Rush Limbaugh.

1260060 which chapters makes you think that? if you don't mind me asking.

Which chapter makes me think she still has a horn? When she commented on how she doesn't know how earth ponies can do anything...or something like that. I think it was when she got a new journal.

1260657 oh, shes making that comment because she is complaining on how difficult she is finding it writing without her horn.

Through out this whole fic she is hornless

i assume i could have explained it a bit better, i'll go back later and fix that. Thanks for pointing that out.:twilightsmile:

~Mister Mikey

Thanks for the confirmation.

Dun dun DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Why is she hornless? :fluttercry: Did herobrine steal her horn/magic? :flutterrage:

Spoiler From the Last Story.
When she went crazy at the end of the last story, she broke it off to write with it.

1260857 unfortunately Kalmeira i correct during her moments of insanity she runs out of ink and breaks off her horn to write with

WHYYYY!:twilightangry2: Will her horn regrow soon?:fluttershysad: PLEASEEEEE? :fluttercry:

Author's Note for Day 46(Thirst)

:twilightsheepish: Uh oh short chapter/page/day thing, you know what that means. This story is coming to an end

Oh and incase you didnt pick it up Twilight is arguing with her journal... in her journal DUN DUN DUNNN

~Mister Mikey

Author's Note for Day 49(Hungry)

:twilightsheepish: in all honesty i'm not at all proud of this one, i'm sure i could have done so much more, but its done sooo... yeah.

Anyway there is just one more chapter/page/day thing and the epilogue of course then this story is done

~Mister Mikey

At this point I would normally point out that daffodils are poisonous, that nothing eats them, they might die if they try, but I'll chalk it up to her being crazy.

1269392 Well that and its what she ordered in "The Ticket Master"

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