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Why is this rated M? I've read it and didn't find anything extreme enough to warrant it.
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The second chapter is clop
I wanted this to be one chapter in its entirety but I decided to split it in two
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Wait, but it's marked as complete.
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second chapter is unpublished currently.
i would know, i'm the one helping on the editing on this.
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I forgot to put it as Incomplete once I decided to split one chapter into two
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it's ok.
Writing characters that are in-universe funny is very difficult. Writing characters that the audience laugh at but the other characters in the story don't find funny (Maud Pie, for example, or Sonata Dusk) isn't so bad, but when you write characters that the other characters also find funny, you're a bit stuck. Because if the other characters find it funny, then you have to show them laughing. And, at that point, you're writing characters laughing at a joke you yourself have written.
Laughing at your own jokes is rarely a good look, but it's doubly bad when you're laughing harder than everyone else. So you have to be as detached as possible, and as conservative in your estimates, about how funny a joke is, and have their reactions in line with that. If the characters are all chuckling away and the reader has barely cracked a smile then it quickly becomes very irritating. So you're trying to do something pretty tricky here.
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Thx for the feedback
Sorry if the puns are a little dry but I guess I mostly make people laugh more on accident than on purpose
*sees the group update*
ask and you shall receive! I'm going to read this now!
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Whoa that was fast
You sure you’re not Sonic the Hedgehog. JK JK
Thx for taking the time to read. Leave some constructive criticism if you can. Or not whatever works for you.
I love this story already- not even kidding
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Already growing on ya huh
Grew on me a while ago
A redemption story about a past antagonist falling in love with a hero. It's been done many times, sure, but this one stands out. Your blending of humour and seriousness feels well done, I can't wait to see where this story goes. Also I've never read a Pinkie x Adagio story before! Usually I don't like reading overly sensual stories but you bring a certain charm to this that really attracts my attention. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Thx for reading
The last chapter is gonna be the sex scene that concludes this story so stay tuned for that
Originally I was gonna do 1 whole chapter but I ended up cutting this down in half to work on the sex scene.
Also I was looking to make a story with the most rarest shipping in this fandom so here this is <3
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I have nothing to criticize about this story! yeah there were words that are accidentally skipped over (I was going to quote the two examples I've found but I lost them), but besides that, I have no complaints
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Thx
I’ll probably find it and edit it later
That was amazing! I like this wholesome story
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Thank you
I expect Pinkie to tired her out and still going.
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