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Thanks! And glad you liked it! It took a few months to make so I hoped it turned out alright

A wonderful concept! I love those sorts of games and loved all your little nods to their rules and logic. I think you've done a real good job here translating the experience of playing a H-platformer into a piece of erotic fiction.

Actually somewhat inspired to attempt my own take on the topic, though I think you already mined most of the good ground here.

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Glad you enjoyed it. Those are certainly interesting types games and I wanted to expand upon it in a way that I could. But if you have an idea, go for it. We always need more content

that was wonderfull to read, and all the suprises ^^
awesome work :)

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Thanks!

Hmm.
What i enjoyed most here was the mentions of Daring's backstory and the journal bits.
But i also liked the fall into lewd with voluntarily losing.

Very nice! I always love a good tentacle story and you really know how to do that, Though, can't see why I got the like for it from.

Anyway, nice add with filly daring do, that's really rare

So... what happened to the final boss? Did it just not appear when Daring went towards the exit again?

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She had to start writing her adventures somewhere. And it isn't a lewd platformer if you don't try out all the bad good endings

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Glad you liked it, I want to monopolize the tentacle/foalcon market and hope that I'm doing a good job at that. And yes, the filly Daring Do is rare... like impossibly so to the point that I don't think there's any. There are no fics or pics anywhere I could find with filly Daring Do being lewded. Need moar!

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Yes, it just might be like a platformer. Also, yes, error and I fixed it, ty. And regarding the final encounter:
"It would have been nice to say that she beat the final creature on her next try, a real good ending to her adventuring book, but that… was not the case."
It took her many, many more times to get through. But like most platformer bad happy endings, much of it would have been the same, and who wants to read more about Daring getting lewded over and over again in the exact same way?

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10493177 Sexy amusement part confirmed. Fun for the whole family!
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Thanks for all the comments they sustain me

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Agreed, keep up the good work!

It couldn’t have been that long, yet who knew; time wasn’t really easy to keep track of here.

Assuming time has any meaning at all.
For all we know, the flow of time inside this amusement park (?) differs from the time of the outside world.

Daring paused for just a moment as she saw a blue slime bouncing down below, just loving its life in the monotonous route that it took, hoping back and forth forever.

Until a certail filly disrupts its perfectly balanced work cycle.

But another thing caught her eye: large lumps traveling down the vine and fast approaching.

I have been here long enough to know where this is going...

With a heavy breath she looked at the tunnel ahead and grimaced. She was back… and she still had to go through that thing to get out.

I was already afraid this was intended to be an unbeatable boss who will release her afterwards out of goodwill; including the gift it gave her, of course.

It took a lot more studying to get through entirely, especially after she found out it had a second phase.

Now I'm curious: What else was there?

This was an interesting story to write

It was interesting to read, too!
Good work.
Also, the platformer aspect was a nice touch.

And how did her parents react? (Did she tell them in the first place?)

Nice work! I liked the whole save points bit. Heck, the whole platform-game format was a hoot.