To the people that disliked the story, could you explain why you disliked?

Edit: I mean this in an constructive way.

It seems like discord secretly wanted fluttershy to kill him. So he would not have to go through with his plans.

It is always the quiet ones

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That is an interpenetration I did not see but is amazing.

Personally, looking back at my story, what my most noticeable flaw in writing the prologue was probably my lack of explanation of certain character changes and character motivations.