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saum22

saum22 #1 · Jul 16th, 2020 · · · Epilouge ·

To the people that disliked the story, could you explain why you disliked?

Edit: I mean this in an constructive way.

TimeLordStudios

TimeLordStudios #2 · Jul 17th, 2020 · 1 · · Epilouge ·

It seems like discord secretly wanted fluttershy to kill him. So he would not have to go through with his plans.

TimeLordStudios

TimeLordStudios #3 · Jul 17th, 2020 · · · Epilouge ·

It is always the quiet ones

saum22

saum22 #4 · Jul 20th, 2020 · · · Epilouge ·

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That is an interpenetration I did not see but is amazing.

saum22

saum22 #5 · Mar 7th, 2021 · · · Epilouge ·

Personally, looking back at my story, what my most noticeable flaw in writing the prologue was probably my lack of explanation of certain character changes and character motivations.