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Fucking GLORIOUS chapter ♡
Happy X-Mas and new year in advance. You sure gifted us early ♡
Fantastic work so far partner, glad to see you still updating- enjoy your holidays and time off, we'll see you later!
Subtitle for this story
WE DON'T LEARN FROM PAST MISTAKES
Slipshod you really need to think before you act.
Oh boy oh boy oh boy oh boy! The eve of war is upon us and we'll soon see explosions and lasers and stompy death robots raining fire on their enemies and stompy death robots raining death down on their enemies exploding!
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Say that to my quad lances. 16 legs forever! (20 for my goliath scorpion goliath and scorpion star) The barghest reigns eternally supreme. Though that one from the most recent rec guide's gonna give it a run for its money.
On tabletop lateral movement, prone abuse, and the occasional quad turret more than makes up for any mobility disadvantages.
In the books it's been described as similar to how bullpups are for modern militaries. Because most folks aren't used to them and would need to retrain themselves to have a similar effectiveness, they don't like it. It wouldn't be dissimilar in feel to walking on arms and legs through the helmet which is more than doable. Some quad aces (i think in the battlecorps anthologies) have described it as a left handed fencer kind of deal. Because biped pilots aren't used to facing quads, their unfamiliarity can be exploited.
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I think you should put the sex tag in, considering others put it in for even talking about it. Or thinking about it. Prude Americans, I guess.
Actually, I don't mind stories with a sex tag - I don't even think they should be filtered by the mature content button.
But the sex obsessed way this story starts out is just plain obnoxious.
To me the characterization of slipknob triggers all sorts of warning signals like wish fulfillment, self insert instead of ... Casanova? Charming rogue?
Anyway, that's just my personal first impression. I'm sure others don't mind, so I can't rightly say it's bad or wrong. I don't want you to take my criticism as mean spirited.
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I'm not interpreting it in a negative way, no; I do genuinely appreciate the critique! Thanks for stopping by, at least!
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Well I don't know how but the cook now sounds like Jay Jonas Jameson and I'm ok with that
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Fun fact, most ppl don't learn from most mistakes the first time either. And often not the second or third for relatively 'minor' things, or things that are so deeply engrained so as to be a part of your core self. Unless, of course, the mistake, and repercussion of said mistake, was sufficiently major to ensure it doesn't happen again after just one instance.