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Oh come on!
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Right? Two chapters back-to-back that end with ambiguous gunshots? It's like the author's some kind of asshole or something!
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You said it, not me
Hanging on for the next update.
Welp, that was quite an intense dressing down. That griffon has a peculiar way to get under your skin if you are a ‘ling... well, more like under your chitin...
Also, she is totally Moira Valhem from XCOM.
Considering the hyper clinical nature of this “sex”would be used.
I like the callback in the chapter name. That was actually my first Battletech novel.
The GLD reminds me of a Dervish except better against most mechs but less versatile (by eliminating the SRMs plus the alternate ammo for the launchers for the medium lasers) and that is a good thing as that is one of my favorite medium mechs.
Well that went from bad to worse. Dang the author and there super writing. I really hate that Flechette had to die. That one is mainly on Twilight. I don't understand why Twilight did not do more to prepare for revealing Slipshod Unless she had no idea what they where going to do to him. I understand why they are being so cruel and I also pretty sure it is necessary. Cant wait to see what happens next chapter. I still think Slipshod is probably the sanest one of the whole group. I am bias on him being a main character.
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Hehe, I've killed main focus characters in three of my other stories (one of them just 1/3 of the way in), so I wouldn't necessarily rule Slipshod as completely safe ;P
Glad you're enjoying the story though!
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Well, in case you didn't notice, every chapter name is actually a Battletech book title. I'm a huge fan of theme naming in general...
Only issue I keep seeing is the crew size if dropships. The Battletech TRO's usually cap crew size as very small. A leopard usually only has 9, some variants as small as 5. Not including mechwarriors and there Techs. Everytime I read the large crew sizes I keep thinking there packed in cheek to jowl.
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I know, but I always took exceptional issue with how absurdly small DropShip crew sizes were in BattleTech, given everything that they were supposed to be able to do. Between repairing Mechs, flying and maintaining the ship, performing salvage efforts, and then all of the general logistics that goes into accounting for the material to do any of that stuff on a vessel that's in space 24 hours a day...
I'm sorry, but no. Nine people do not do that on a ship the size of real world navy corvette.
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JACKBOOT NOOOOOOOOO *sobs like a child*
Yeah, i am having a lot of problems reading the story now, This kind of a mistake is either utter stupidy that should bar one from leadership positions or malice. This mistake here only cost one Pony's life his blood is on Twilight's hooves even more directly than the convoys is. If she is capable of something like this imagine how many people have died due to her foolishness when she had actual power as a ruler.
It just yanks me out of the story so much whenever fallout of it is brought up in this chapter. Either an utter fool or this is some sick conscious or unconscious revenge.
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Remember though: Twilight is still trying to come to terms with how much more violent and unforgiving the galaxy has become in her absence. Even having just been confronted with the slaughter of civilians, and seeing for herself how cruel some can be in the modern age, surely she could rely on the Celestia League-in-Exile, of all groups, to still hold true to the ideals of Friendship and Harmony that she'd used as its foundation...right? I mean, it's being run by her niece! They wouldn't do something as barbaric as kill innocents and torture their prisoners...
...right?
Well, that was next-level retarded.
Torture... And like that your about to lose my like if its get worse
After that chapter there are only evil and lesser evil
Damn
That could've been avoided if Twilight had spoken for five minutes about how she knew thatthere was at least a changeling on the Galloway. Kinda weird that she didn't.