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Katrina SteinerVictoria Blueblood you say? FedCom! FedCom! FedCom!10622654
FedCom indeed! Though, in the interests of condensing 50~ years of fascinating events into this one story, Victoria will likely end up playing double duty as both Katrina and Melissa :P
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Whoooooo!!!
Okay a bit of a rant here.
I am mixed on Flurry. While I cheer on her knockign her aunt for her handling the trio. and Twilight you are wrong that it wouldn't be right to smash them back then for let's look at thier crimes before stoning.
Tirek: Three times..count it THREE times tried to suck magic of all ponies which could likely kill them due to being so weak.
Cozy: her very first plan would end all magic and likely the death of all flying beings as they fall to their deaths. AND SHE DIDN'T CARE.
Chryssy: well she ran stupidly and even if she conquered Equestria at the wedding. HOW long would that last? and even with Starlight's attempted refused reform. and now add in what she has done Flurry is quite correct.
However why do either need to abdicate? Why not dual rule? I think they can balance each other. a Luna?Celestia thing.
Speaking of Luna, it sounds like she is not on Equs anymore, so could they run into her in this?
I get a feeling of a bit of anti Flurry and Twilicorn going on here.
I like this story but some of the choices make feel like idiot balling. I get mold the Elements for dragons but why the rest? Sadly I think Twilight's most reliable ally is not even her family but Slipshod
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I'm just glad you're interested enough in the story to bother with a rant :D
You make good points about the trio's crimes, and their severity; but, keep in mind that pony society hasn't really ever been on board with capital punishment. It's not something Twilight likely would have even thought to consider back then.
As for co-ruling, I didn't see a jaded Flurry like the one she's become by now being open to sharing everything she's managed to build herself with the pony who she holds largely responsible for messing things up in the first place. Certainly not with emotions running high upon reuniting.
The Clanners in the source material aren't exactly "friendship oriented" after all :P
And I like to think there's a difference between idiot-balling and simply not thinking things through objectively/logically before taking action. Emotions can cloud thinking, especially in the moment.
At least, I hope I'm not that much of a hack writer: P
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It's because of that jadedness that Twilight is needed. And Spike and Ember can put pressure on her.
Like I said. The only reliable ally she has is slipshod
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Ah the Balius. I have one for my Hells Horses.
This is a really well thought out chapter. I love seeing how it explains and makes it very understandable why Flurry Heart is angry with Twilight. I love how it goes into all the nuance of the politics. I also like how Twilight seems to have finally taken her smart pill and seems to be adapting to the changes around her.
Making Slipshod reason helping for revenge, are much more understandable then just having him help because it's the right thing.
I very much enjoy Slipshod take on things. Partly because it differs from my own.
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Glad you're enjoying it!
Admittedly, I have something of an advantage when it comes to delving into the motivations, in that I'm lifting most of them from the BattleTech source material :P
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Even though you are using info from another source, you are doing a very good job of integrating that into MLP universe.
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am reading it now and I have to say my god it's like the clans all over again with that little girl.
if anything this is how the clans started in the lore
also the more i read this the more am seeing the problems there making.
one never change leadership no matter what, the nazi learn that the hard way and so did the USSR
Magnificent. A epic chapter ♡
Things are starting to ramp up and pieces are starting to move. I hope Doc gets revealed for what he is before he can cause any damage and Squelch spaces him.
skip chapter, execute corrupt flurry heart
Is Flurry Heart stepping in for one of Kerenski's sons?
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Not really, no. At least, that wasn't my intent for her. Her purpose is more narrative than to serve as an expy.
Hope you're enjoying the story!
I don’t know much else, but what I can tell you is the Princess Flurry Heart is not long for this world.
And also Slipshod is probably going to get vivisected. Again.
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*Feigned whistling of innocence*
"If I had a C-bit for every time I was vivisected, I'd have two C-bits! Which isn't a lot; but it's weird that it happened twice..."
-Slipshod, maybe
Oooh boy, a lot of stuff going on in this chapter.