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Majestical4729


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Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich could never be any happier after their wedding, until they have a child named Lil' Cheese, completing they family and love story...or has it? New interesting things in life kept coming their way, before Lil'Cheese's birth, and after.


This is my ninth overall (and originally going to be sixteenth, then twelfth) story, and my apology to the people who dislike my second overall story, as I felt that I had to and wanted to make amends for it. Plus, I have became neutral with Cheesepie, no longer disliking it. And the only reason I felt that I dislike it was because I was jealous of how lucky it was to be the only one in a million ships to become cannon during 'The Last Problem'.


I actually wanted to write a story about Pinkie and Cheese having their child for my second story, but thought that someone else already did so, making it meaningless for me to do so, until I figured that there are higher chances that my story is different from others.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 4 )

Great start! A little bit of Pinkie and Cheese being out of character with the flirting but other than that it’s good. :twilightsmile:

The ponies looked at each other, before Cheese began, "My beloved Pinkie, I have...I mean, the doctors have something to tell you: You. Are... pregnant ."

I would prefer if the doctors told Pinkie it kind of sounds strange coming from Cheese. It kinda sounds like he a doctor and not the father. I don’t know if it’s just me but I just wanted to point that out:

"And stopped making all those inventions that could hurt some creature ever before he got the job, after being mostly responsible for accidentally hurting my husband Caramel before we got married." Applejack explained.

Don’t ship these two but oh wells. I wish it was AppleDash but that’s okay. Anyways are Applejack and Pinkie the only ones married in this story?

"And you should have seen how cute they were as husband and wife back there at the Academy! When she was trusting him with the captain's duties!" Surprise squealed as she told Pinkie Pie, to Rainbow Dash's embarrassment.

AWWW SOARINDASH!!! One of my OTP With Rainbowdash! I still can’t believe she the captain. Hmm seems like Spitfire finally retired. :rainbowderp:

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