Sharp Shooter finally returns home after being stationed overseas for two years. Only problem is, no one really sees him as a hero, or anything positive for that matter. With no job or family, Sharp travels to Ponyville.
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Nicely done! The first kill is never easy. Thought, why you don't use buck if I may ask?
Solid chapter. Some small typos/odd sentences here and there but very enjoyable. :3 Looking forward to the next one.
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Yeah I know, I tried something different for this chapter to experiment a little, but it didn't really work for me, so it won't be like that for the future chapters.
Again, you were able to make me read a lot without I would notice it. Well done!
I wish writing well was as easy as reading well, but alas, that's life.
Amazing chapter and amazing to see this is still alive! Looking forward to more in the future!
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Thank you!
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I know but my brain does what it wants.
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I get that, that's why I'll try not to use it.
Very interesting setup. Verrrrry interesting place to cut it. We back in Ponyville next?
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Yes.
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I apologise for any typos that I missed while editing. I do what I can and fix what I notice or what I feel needs to be fixed.
Wow look at this fanart https://derpibooru.org/images/2445885?q=oc%3Asharp+shooter
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That's not fanart, it's the art I had commissioned for my story. How the buck did it get there??
Sharp has good taste in milk and mares.
And milkmares!
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No idea lol but i saw it there than before i finished this chapter lol
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Well I can see they used the this chapter's link to get it. That's something at least.
They say a soldiers life is one of adventure and excitement.
But that's something they tell to rookies.
Another excellent chapter, I really like how you write one chapter dedicated to the present and one to the past. It helps give backstory to the characters and also allows for those all too good cliff hangers to really make themselves known. Also, holy crap what a horrible curse for Sharp to have I can only begin to imagine how much this affected him psychologically.
Great chapter curse you and your good writing
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Thanks you! Yes, I thought it be interesting to explore a little darker side to a cutie mark.
awesome chapter keep it up
I wonder if Sharp is going to get some moniker by the rebel forces
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
In the heat of battle, it’s kill or be killed. Sharp made the correct choice, the choice I hope I could make if I were ever in his situation. At the end of the day, I’d rather walk home with my buddy by my side, knowing I killed a man to make sure he’d return with me, rather than walk home alone, wondering if I had acted differently, a friend would be alive.
"Hello Swamp Ass my old friend..."
Lovely artwork.
I read that story.
That's a beautiful rifle.
Did Sharp eventually get a scope for his rifle?