Sharp Shooter finally returns home after being stationed overseas for two years. Only problem is, no one really sees him as a hero, or anything positive for that matter. With no job or family, Sharp travels to Ponyville.
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Huh. Was expecting something different, yet I'm satisfied.
I'm like: A surprised to be sure, but a welcomed one.
Its fine, better than never
Drunk fun!!
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A fine saying.
the picture of the two hoof wrestling at the bar, of course you can see Berry in it. A bar isn't complete without its favorite regular the town drunk
That liquid courage is some good stuff isn’t it?
I love how the table broke before sharp did
Nice
most everyone is nearly 100% honest when they're drunk, Applejack. You should know that being the element of honesty!
Well, shit. I didn't realize I was already stuck on the last chapter until I couldn't find the "next chapter" button. Normally I hate flashbacks in stories, but the way your write your characters and the situations they find themselves in ends up being so enthralling, that I can't help but keep reading through it.
The romance between Applejack and Sharp Shoot feels a little quick, but I'm glad you slowed it down so they're not french kissing within two chapters. They're still testing the waters, but Granny Smith is a devious filly, so I'm sure she'll get what she wants at the end of it.
I would love to hear princess Celestia's stance on this whole war thing. Despite this version of Equestria being an alt. universe compared to the one we originally know of. I would still love to know what was going through her mind when she decided to go down this route.
Otherwise, I hope to see the next chapter soon. I enjoy story gems like these.
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Of course it's quiet. Modern war is pretty hard on people who never faced it before. People think war was glorious yet thousands cross the trenches and marched to their deaths by machine gun fire to fight their General's noble war. Young men, snatched up before it being their time. This, is modern war.
Jesus christ this is one of the best applejack stories out there. Please keep up the amazing quality you've had throughout this story.
I can't wait until the next chapter is done. I loved reading it i actually feel more sad for Sharp and i just want to give him a hug or a warm welcome home.
Great story so far, can't wait to see where it further goes.
I’m enjoying this a lot so far and I do hope to see more soon! Keep up the awesome work Danish!