• Member Since 8th May, 2020
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Yoraiko


a german writer who would love some feedback for his translated shortstory so he can try equestria daily.

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In a far, far away future, Equestria isn't anything like it was once when the elements of harmony where still in existence. Instead, the always-burning twilight rules the land of ponies and magic - just as the rest of the world.

Few are still alive, fewer even have the will to live.
But some can't die, no matter huch much they may yearn for it.
Such is the fate of princess Twilight under the twilight.

There is no magic in this world anymore.
There is no hope.

Only the twilight.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

Very Dark and intense! Loved it!

Very interesting.

So almost every alicorn and Discord turned evil in some way causing an apocalipse that Twilight and Cozy are now trying to solve. Its a bit hard to believe that something like this could happen, although after that finale anything could be possible.

Nice to see a happy ending in all of this. Wouldn't even mind a sequel.

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I dont know if evil is the right term, but I really want for every reader to make his own thoughts about the events.

I wonder if they thought about time travel... If Starlight managed to change things, they could do the same

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