• Published 15th Apr 2020
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The Creature Behind the Skull - Mentality



Keep in mind how close you get to the Everfree. Something might just be waiting.

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Comments ( 15 )

Thank u may have many kv2 tank shaped cookies in ur future

This soldier is a weak idiot.

No creature that's ever been through a war acts like this.

He's WEAK AS HELL. Doesn't even have any combat capability, nor pain tolerance.

You might as well have isekai'd a school shooter who completed rehab.

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Yes yes, I’m taking this into consideration and will be making changes here and there when I have the time

More please

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The next chapter is in the making!

While I don't like it much when the MC has "surprise magic", this one has gotten my interest.

*slaps tracking button*

Comment posted by Canned_buttr deleted Jun 28th, 2020

Do not stop lad you are doing amazing

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Don’t worry about me stopping. I had to take a break for awhile due to personal issues, but now that I’m back in order, the next chapter will be up in no time!

Though please excuse any dropped quality, I haven’t written in awhile and I kinda have to get my mojo back.

Ill give this a shot, but I have a hard time getting past the description.

I learned along time ago that if in a job interview or a new-hire orientation, the more time the company spends telling you how great the job is, and how happy you will be, the worst and more miserable the job really is.

Just the way the description goes on and on telling me how phenomenal and stupendous this guy is, Just gives me horrible expectations on the actual story.

Here goes nothing.

The Monk.
“They may have been a pair of idiots, but the true test of intelligence is how you stick the landing!” -The Dimensional Traveler

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Thank you for honest feedback, I will definitely take a mental note of this and hopefully improve!

bruh, the dude in the picture kinda looks like ghost from warzone

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