• Published 15th Jan 2021
  • 335 Views, 12 Comments

Freedom's call: Writers Cut - Bronycommander



A collection of what-if thoughts of Freedom's call with Scotch Tape, Blackjack, P-21, Fletcher, Chung and Kate, kept seperate to keep the orginal story teen

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Comments ( 7 )

10839424
I can recommend some storys as examples but i will be bussy with the other sex scene adding more foreplay and details here and there.

Since i have no idea what character Chung is i rather not assume his actions. Than again a quicky is good enough for a 'head up' scene... Just slightly sucks he get only one shot out before getting his life changed forever :derpytongue2:

10839468
Its better than the previous chapter. Still a few detail couldnt hurt. Literally probably preventing that :trollestia: Well i be off for now. Read you later :raritywink:

10839471
sure, i had wrote that with more experience at the time

Is it my imagination but didn’t Kate and P-21 make love with each other already in the previous chapter?

11709401
That was fletcher, the other stallion

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