“Okay, I keep that in mind.” Kate acknowledged before yawing. They both then took the dishes to the dishwasher and brushed their teeth.

yawning

He’s a horse, it would be Bestiality! Then again…he’s as intelligent as a human, a sapient being…would it really count?

Spaces after the points.
Also they are no beasts. Since they are sapient. That my view

Now, the unicorn took a step back. “I can take care of this myself.” He tried to defuse the situation but saw despair in the human’s eyes.

care - needs to be added.

Fletcher couldn’t describe what was driving him as his horn lit up, gently removing her top and bra, blushing. During his stay, he always respected her wish to look away when she got dressed and now, he actually saw her naked.

A willing female begging for his load... What ever could be the reason for him to comply?

Her breasts were c-cup in size, her build average, nothing special and yet…he felt somehow excited to see her like this.

Space after the points.

In the early morning, Fletcher yawned and stretched himself, feeling something warm around him. “Good morning.” Kate smiled warmly at him .

Point at the very end is missing!

”Morning.” He replied before got up, the former getting dressed.

“I'm Mid-Mite.” Midnight’s foal drone introduced himself, causing the unicorn and Pegasus to break out in laugher.

laughter - your missing the laughter 't'

Nice chapter over all. Im surprised how fast she could fit him in Sometimes a extended stretch adds to the fun describtion

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thank you. I took inspiration from a erotic text game for this scene