Tirek had planned to make this the best Hearth's Warming gift that Spike, Angel, Gabby, Applebloom, Scootaloo, and Sweetie Belle had ever received. But they aren't the only ones getting a surprise...
This story has plot elements of a story that I'm currently writing, but I hope it will be able to stand on it's own. I just wanted to get something out for Christmas, so here goes nothing!
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I think you are missing a "deserve" after that first "don't" there.
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I plan on rewriting this, so I'm not going to worry about it.
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Fair enough. Looking foward to your new projects.