It's been four years since Shadowblaze was executed. Peace prospered, everypony was happy, and Ponyville gained a new librarian. But peace ends...Especially at the Gala.
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...Really? You used our OC's?! lol, Well ok then.
Just a quick thing, AR is not white, he's off white, and you had a typo towards the beginning. Other than that, not bad so far.
I asked you before man! You've been a BIG help with this. The stuff's fixed.
1506507 You did? ah well, anywho, I look forward to reading more eventually.
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Awesome :D
So...Big Mac is asking for AJ's help in plowing Blackjack...
After this the rest of the chapter was one giant innuendo between him and Big Mac.
Made all the worse with
2674318 no no, he asked for Blackjack's help with plowing. The barn door line was to show the respect Blackjack has for mares. I can see how you'd think that way, however.
2674318 On the Trolling Scale: I'll give it Fluttershy's initial Wing Power: .5, thanks for playing.
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The way the sentence was structured he was saying "You can help me plow Blackjack." What you wanted to say was "You can help me plow, Blackjack." The lack of comma changed the meaning of the sentence. And after seeing that, the rest of the scene between Big Mac and him was just littered with innuendo for me...so much 'plowing'
Also the phrase "my barn door doesn't swing that way" means the persons sexuality is the opposite of the implied. So Blackjack saying his barn door doesn't swing that way towards Twilight would mean he was saying he's gay.
2677753
Considering there was zero trolling done, I'd say that score is too high. Though I grant you I probably should have made my original intentions more clear.
2677979 thank you for the help! I will fix that immediately!
2677753 no no, he was merely giving constructive criticism
Dayum dids is a good story!
WRITE MOAR OR I KILL
3777529 heh heh, don't worry! More will be out fairly soon!
dude make...a sequel, PLEASEEEEEE!!!!!!
with cupcakes on top
Garbage with a pansy-ass protagonist.