• Member Since 8th Dec, 2019
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Da Bois


They told me a virgin can't write smut. I'll prove them wrong.

Comments ( 7 )

What would it take for you to make this into a series

9987893
Do you mean like following Velvet and Aphelia and the stuff they get into? I never really fleshed them out fully as characters, but I could probably do that.

Haven't gotten to reading it yet and will likely update this after but my first bit of advice is to not say things like this "This is my first clop fic, please be gentle with the comments and ratings U//w//U But feedback is still appreciated." It instantly invites people to do exactly what you asked them not to because they know it will affect you. Plus it looks like you're saying that you already know it's bad but you and are making excuses as to why. I don't think you are but it could be interpreted that way and may cause some people to skip reading it.

10000490
The views and ratings are miles ahead of what I was expecting, so I think I'll probably just leave it as is. But thanks for the advice anyway.

10028190
After reading it I did like the story. I'm just trying to help.

A full series of this please.

10065460
Soon™.

I've got my main account to keep up with and another story for this account in progress, but I am thinking about ways I could continue with Velvet and Aphelia. This account is on the back burner and I don't write much to begin with, so it could take a while.

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