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Omegathyst
Female Writer, Bisexual Writer, Smolder X Mare Crackship Connoisseur. Creator of the Smolderverse, and writer of many other kinds of clop and SFW stories (Commissions temporarily OPEN)
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What's "Side-Clop"?
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Like a spin-off to the main plot of the series. A side story, if you will.
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
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------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-This story really doesn’t waste any time.
-The Big Mae thing was a WTF moment that doesn’t really help this story along.
-Did not get Yona’s dialect down right.
-Smolder’s aggression really came out of nowhere. I thought she was there to learn things? But then she didn’t really learn anything ... she just jumped into fucking everybody with her tail.
-It’s all extremely rushed.
-Payment? What? I’m confused by the ending.
-Using a dragon’s tail as a cock substitute is kind of interesting.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 40/100
Allure: 20/100
Enticement: 75/100
Immersion: 60/100
Prose Quality: 90/100
Total Score: 285/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.
Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!