Sunset ate ass

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zachary12

zachary12 #1 · Sep 25th, 2019 · · 1 ·

nice work do you think you can do a chapter of your old stories like Symbiotic relationship

MetaKnight145

MetaKnight145 #2 · Sep 25th, 2019 · · ·

Contains Suicide

What great timing you have for this story there.

LudicrousBot

LudicrousBot #3 · Sep 25th, 2019 · 4 · ·

Guess you could say this story ate ass. I’m sorry for the shit pun, I’ll escort myself out. (No offense)

The Blue EM2

The Blue EM2 #4 · Sep 25th, 2019 · · ·

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I know, right? What with Holy.

I'm sorry, this story needs a basic proofread. The person who wrote this needs to work on splitting characters up into separate paragraphs.
Hence;

"Have you heard what happened?" one person asked.
"Sorry, all I know is they found a body hanging in the nearby trees," said another.
"Such a shame," another said, "he was quite cute and adorable".

And not;

"Have you heard what happened?" one person asked. "Sorry, all I know is they found a body hanging in the nearby trees," said another. "Such a shame," another said, "he was quite cute and adorable".

cunning_linguist