Roseluck, Jak And Daxter had always been together, raised since childhood by Samos the sage. She never thought it was weird that she was so different from her brothers or the others in the Sandover village having hooves for feet, a two tone red tail and strange animal like ears. One day, a fateful journey to Misty Island will send her and her brothers on a journey of heroes and self discovery, of danger and excitement. Though there is much hidden in this world and as she learns it, will she rise to the challenge alongside her brothers or fall before ever finding out the truth.
will follow the original ps2 versions of the games wih some serious changes. will only be following the OG trilogy though and none of the other games. PERIOD (mostly because i never played them) Inspired by talking with a friend about my want to do a Roseluck story.
Gunna try to update this every 7-14 days but with my track record i make no promises.
This is a good start to a story, though I did spot a few things you might want to fix.
Yeah... the same as always.
You missed a question mark at the end, so it would be 'Slow down child, what is the rush for today?'
Well... I had the dream again last night...
Again... I am sorry to hear that
Should be "Hey Daxter, hey Jak...
Also, you should capitalize Misty Island in the last paragraph, but, other than what I have pointed out, I still think this is a good start to a story.
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Thank you very much the suggested changes have been made to the chapter.
when will you continue this story?
do continue it
hay continue it I want to see more chapters
continue it