Deceptive title not withstanding I went and read over Jak & Daxter: Eco Roses, after the friend who helped inspire it and i talked abit about it this morning. I have made a few minor changes to the chapter that i think help make it flow a little better but nothing that changes the overall chapter and fixed some other errors as well.

So I finally did it..i finally gave in and made a displaced story. Its Roseluck going through the Jak & Daxter Series. Give it a look and a read. if you like it tell me with a comment or a suggestion for the future of the story. if I use something you suggest i will credit you in the authors notes.