That didn't mean she was going to let his load just spill on the ground. The air under Sash shimmered, along with her horn, and every rope that shot out of his twitching dick stopped in mid air. When he was all done, she walked in front of him and opened her mouth wide to him.

I’m glad that one day I will die having read about somebody using the World’s ultimate Stand ability on cum.

Anyways, this fic was a breath of fresh air after a few of the entries I had read. If I have one criticism, it’s that the trans angle just seemed to be kind of shoved in there. I feel like it was something that should have been toyed with throughout the piece. I did really enjoy it, though.

Actually, a second criticism comes to mind - I didn’t much care for the coercion angle. It felt... wrong. Slightly rape-ish, or reverse-rape-ish as the case may be. I would have had Shining Armor absolutely ecstatic at the idea of getting some cute colt booty. But overall, this was quite a strong showing.