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Following an accident involving Scootaloo, Rainbow Dash and the other Wonderbolts meet Old Silver, Spitfire's estranged brother, as well as learning he lost his wings due to his sister's arrogance. But once Rainbow and Scootaloo are summoned by the map to repair Spitfire and Silver's relationship, all four will find themselves getting caught up a journey of revenge and redemption.
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This is a good story that I like one of my few problems with it is that it seems to be bashing spitfire of she's a shity person. Same with rest of her family for pretty much encourage her to do it. I also think that what could be good to see more of what happened before silver ran away for example the parent slowly stop helping silver coop with the loss of his wings and indirectly encourage spitfire to bully silver. I also think that rainbow dash informing twilight who in turn tells the celestia and luna about the situation forcing them to get involved because spitfire has openly sabotaged the wonderbolts,hired bandits, sabotaged a friendship mission, and standing against what equestria teaches. But hey that's my thoughts
Luckily, I do have plans for Luna getting involved,
And a potential sequel/prequel anthology of one off stories about Silver.
This is a fantastic story. It has great charecters and has a epic feel to the storyline. Are you planning on continuing with more chapters?
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I’m happy you like my work. Luckily for you I am working on the next chapter. Should be out within the week
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Thats great to hear I'm excited to see how the rest of the story goes.
That was a great chapter. I like how you reveled that Spitfires anger of her brother was similar to how Luna felt with her sister. Can'the wait for the next chapter.
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Happy you liked it.
Author’s note: Since I didn’t know where to put it, here is a list of what accents silver and the crew, as well as a few other characters have.
Old Silver and Black Watch: Scottish
Nelson and Wyvern: English
Cap’n Flint: Lancashire
Perry and Ishmael: American.
Skibby and Port Side: Irish
Also, Wyvern has voice similar to the character of the same name in Dead Man’s Chest.
I apologize for the delays in updates but I’ve been very busy lately. Sorry for the slow progress
Did you sneak in a treasure planet reference?
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Maybe. 😊. You able to get the references in Nelson and Perry?
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Yes i was
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Not really luna was jealous of the attention ponies gave to celestia and not her while Spitfire was upset over the things not going her way for the first time in her life and her brother finally finding his place after suffering.
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The idea is that Spitfire is too stubborn to admit her problem, and Luna is the only one who can both find out and come close to empathizing
Nice work showing a changing point for spitfire and old silvers relationship
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Thanks. I’ve been struggling to have spitfire loosen up around him, especially with her interactions with Nelson and Perry
If the main OCs in this story had voice actors, what would they sound like?
Love how you began the story with that sea shanty. It was one of my favorite songs sung by long john silver from muppet treasure island
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Silver would be voiced by Gideon Emery
Black Watch would be bill nighy
Perry would be either Alan tudyk or Alan Alda
Nelson would be Tobias Menzies
Wyvern would be someone who could impersonate John botswall,
And flint should be someone who can do a good Bristol or Lancashire accent
Hey everyone. Next chapter should be out in a few days. I just wanted to say that I am so thankful so many people like my story. I didn’t expect it to be this well received. So thank you every one!
That's cool how you showed princess luna showing spitfires brothers memories. Gives an even bigger depth to the story.
I actually have an idea about when this story finally concludes. What if you do another adventure with old silver and his crew, and they join up with captain cilano and her crew from the the mlp movie. It would make a great storyline and introduce other new charecters. Just a suggestion, but you don't have to consider it if you don't want to. This is already a great story.
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You know I actually wrote in my character guide that Perry has a grudge against Cilano. I never expanded on it since it didn’t serve a real story purpose. But the idea does seem intriguing
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Yeah, that would actually show a lot of depth between the charecters if they did have some kind of past with one another. You could also feature certain references from other pirate or sailor movies. Would you also include spitfire and rainbow dash in it or a different member of the main 6.
Hello everyone. Thought I’d give a simple little teaser for the next chapter. There will be a reference to assassin’s creed three at one point. Where? No one knows. 😊
Author’s note; the new characters, then bartender and Sharp Shot, speak with Australian accents. Also any of the locals of Botany Bay who aren’t explicitly said otherwise are also coded Australian
Nice dramatic story telling with the bar fight. Did you also use a star wars reference?
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I originally planned on Rainbow Dash refer to Botany Bay as “a hive of scum and villainy.” However I felt it was both too obvious and too sophisticated for her. What did you think was the Star Wars reference?
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You know when Han Solo shoots Greedo and before he leaves the cantina he says "sorry about the mess" and tosses him credits.
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Oh yeah that. Anyway did you get the ac3 reference?
Sorry I didn't notice what was the reference?
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When silver has his confrontation with Snipe Hunt and the others, their dialogue is pretty close to an exchange Haytham Kenway has in ac3 with a few British soldiers, only altered so the raiders don’t use the term cully.
There are a few other movie references but I’ll leave those to the observant. 😉
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Oh now I see it.
Hey everyone. To follow on an older thread, I figured that if cutthroat was voiced by anyone it would be Steve J. Palmer, best known as Bill Williamson
So my story has hit 250 views. Just wanted to say thank you to everyone who read and likes it. 😊
Don't you think introducing tuberculosis might be a little extreame?
9871792on reflection a bit. I will say that she’ll ultimately be fine. I’m also gonna warm that the next two chapters will ultimately get pretty depressing. Nothing else the movie hasn’t depicted other than one more instance of swearing but, it’s getting to the ultimate low point.
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The chapter you just posted is pretty hardcore. I'm just hoping wind rider gets what's coming to him.
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Fun fact: wind rider’s physical appearance, down to his uniform and being slightly fat was inspired by Herman Goering. And since he was a fighter ace and leader of the luftwaffe I thought it felt kind of appropriate
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Where are those places?
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Lancashire is a county in northwest England. Bristol is a city in the south west of England and most famous as the birth place of Edward Teach (Blackbeard)
To help with the story’s time line,
The events between chapters three and the upcoming fourteenth take place over the course of eight days.
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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Definitive choices...
Silver is Gideon emery doing a Scottish accent
Nelson is Tobias Menzies
Perry is Alan Tudyk
Wyvern is John Botswall (rip)
Black Watch is Bill Nighy doing a Scottish accent or Brian Cox
Cutthroat is Frederick Coffin (rip) or Steve J Palmer,
Quigley is Tom Selleck (obviously)
And Blood Diamond is Temuera Morrison
Fun fact: blood diamond was originally going to have a South African accent, but I felt a New Zealand accent fit the character’s soft spoken voice better
Fun fact: this story is meant to take place in between seasons 8 and 9
Hey everyone. I was going back over what I wrote and noticed a few contradictions concerning Somers’s species. I’ll be going back to fix these and exclusively refer to him as a Pegasus
Hello everyone. To celebrate 300 views, I’ve decided to give a little teaser for the next chapter: we go ship to ship
Nice action sequences in this chapter. Can't wait for the next.