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Jhoira


Time to write some fanfiction! Yay! If you have any thoughts comment! I find reading them fun!

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Wow, the emotional throughout this. I could feel it behind the words. I really enjoyed this.

<3

We need a sequel.

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Do we? A sequel in what direction? Applejack dies? Rarity finds out and they become polygamous? Rainbow Dash finds love elsewhere? Rainbow Dash goes to Equestria to hit on the other Rarity? I mean I could definitely do a sequel... I'm writing a lot recently. I think it's all my pent up energy waiting for Total War: Three Kingdoms to come out.

Even though I saw it coming, that last letter still hurt to read. Poor Dash.

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Hehe. "I know it's coming but I can't stop reading!" I know that feeling.

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A sequel following rainbow dash at the wedding she tries to be a soldier and tough it out but right after the kiss and they are officially married she quickly gets out of the room and suddenly breaks down. Continue with rarity not knowing whats going on. Just how much pain she is unknowingly causing. And then from there work in one of those directions. I dont see the polygamous working and dont make AJ die. And i cant see rainbow leaving everything she knows and loves to go to the other world But take it in some direction later. A fun one is one of her friends (another of the main 6) had been in love with her but hadnt done anything because dash had been in love with rarity. That would be a fun one.

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Got it, polygamy -and- AJ dies. Got it! :D

She almost punched something every time she saw Applejack and Rarity being lovey, she snapped at Fluttershy so badly that one time over spilling a drink in the movies she cried. Ugh, being around those two made her so miserable! She couldn't handle it!

Ok, I don’t care how upset you are you do not snap on your friends. And that honestly is a terrible excuse.

Rainbow Dash against hook her head. "I can't just lie to them!"

Yes you can. Also, she says she can’t, but she did.

She kissed Applejack on the cheek and walked away, humming to herself, completely oblivious to the turmoil she'd caused in two girls lives.

That’s an interesting way to put it.

"You're a stronger woman than I am Rainbow Dash... I'm sorry." Applejack folded up the letter and put it in her pocket, patting it gently.

That’s interesting to here.

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It's perfectly reasonable to react poorly to a bad situation.

And she didn't lie. You can be happy for someone else while upset for yourself.

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But, is it reasonable to act that poorly?

Also, that’s interesting.

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Stressed people don't act reasonably.

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