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Xutiepops


Just a girl wasting her life away on this fun site

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Twilight Sparkle, the new kid with out standing grades, is pretty lovable at Canterlot High. Her new friends make things a lot easier for her, especially since they're really shy and over dramatic. And as one of the prettiest girls in school, guys are drooling over her. Scary enough for her, the baddest rainbow haired chick in the school won't get away from her. Enticing enough for Rarity, she has her own unwillingly protective guard dog cowgirl named Applejack. Sadly enough for Rarity, what could she do when that guard dog, steals her heart with a few words?

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 27 )

Before I put this in potential read later.... I’m confused on the premise. Is this following two stories? One about Twilight and Rainbow Dash? And the other following Rarity? And based on tags.... Applejack? I just want the confusion cleared up. Your description leaves much to be desired in way of clarity.

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The main relationship is Twidash, but I thought it would be cute to include Rarijack in the situation. So yeah, kind of. Sorry for the confusion, I can definitely see how confusing it is now.

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Good to know! Rarijack = ❀️ Soooo I’ll be adding that to my read later

Was that a doki doki reference? If so run twilight run and don’t look back!

was kind of hope spitfire was an adult pro player that rainbow dash look up to, and some how related to twilight

So she was friends with Lemon Zest.

Nice chapter!πŸ˜ƒ more soon CC:

....more updates...!! And gah! I want progress for Rarity and Applejack!!! Especially for Rares... at the moment, her falling for AJ would be a tad ooc because she hates her so much... unless there is history there we don’t know yet. I just want more of them.

I really liked this chapter. It's the first that wasn't filled with I'm using a trope here call outs. Even trope using is better done show not tell. Here you did that far better than previous chapters. Glad to see the improvement in what has been otherwise a fun twidash read.

Indigo laughed nervously and hugged Twilight again. Just before she left, she pecked Twilight on the cheek and ran off.

I ship them! :pinkiehappy:

P.S. I'm surprised of the lack of comments in the last two chapters, so here's one on the house

Looking forward for more !! <3

The tropes man, the tropes. 5 stars

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its an horror visual novel game. like some major f up things and some fourth wall breaks.

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This. Is the. Most. Awesome. TwiDash fic. I've. Ever read!!!!
Please please please continue this! I can't wait anylonger!!! Ahhhh
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😍😍😍😍

This was a great read! You captured the characters in their best light~ so to speak!

This story made me a harder SciTwiDash shipper! And I guess you can say you made my day 20% cooler.
Thank you!

Ive really enjoyed this so far, are you still working on it? It would be sad to see such a good story die before its conclusion.

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I AGREE, CANT WAIT FOR MORE

Could use some editing.. also in EqG Friendship Games Cadence was the dean at Crystal Prep and Shining Armor was a graduate of Crystal Prep.
Also I don't ship Sunlight, I ship Twidash. Flashlight just feels forced.

I hope this gets updated, it’s a great story!

Bruh I'm so upset about how the story ended. I love the take that this author did with the main seven. I feel like the writing is really good and well paced. but the last two chapters for me basically destroyed me. I was so disappointed with that last two chapters that I don't even know how to feel about the story the ending is everything to me. However it was a great little journey

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