In Year of 567, The Inventor Electric Spark creates first Equidroid ever and demonstrates it to Celestia itself while proposing the idea of Equidroids replacing Ponies in different work fields. Being not happy with whole ordeal, Celestia says no and the Inventor is forced to forget about his creation and leave it behind
Time goes on, and Equidroid boots up for second time in year 1004 and sets a new directive which will make him into something more that Equidroid
"Figure out who I am"
Chapters (5)
I like this...
I like this, but it desperately needs an Editor
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Thanks for your feedback! I'm aware that I need one, but I'm kind-of on my own here
thought I would appreciate some flaws that at least you noticed
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Thank you!
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...I don't think you want me to point these things out as a Commentator
This story has so much potential and I look forward to reading more of what will happen next.
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Thanks!
I've been itching to write a robot story myself... Your robot is, if I may, adorable
... But it needs a personality. Also your writing isn't solid. I'm not a professional editor, but I flatter myself to write decently. I could help 
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Thanks for the feedback! I would accept your help if I had a something resembling schedule, but I sadly don't have that and I feel that would be unfair to you
And thanks for pointing something that I probably wouldn't have noticed!
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You are welcome
Despite the update schedule not being there, I would find it splendid, even if I had to edit an unexpected chapter... But it should be a conversation then... You see, I might want to ask you questions regarding what you'd have written, as not always is it clear, what the writer wanted to say
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So... If you end up writing one more chapter and decide you might use a helping hand -- or if you just decide you need what you've got of your story already revised and edited -- then you might want to ask me, and we'd talk about the ways to improve
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I am capable of noticing things others wouldn't even know to have been existing
. I do let some slide, because editing/pointing it out for the others may be a hard work, when I'd rather read it like an ordinary guy -- but robots make me excited to Pinkie's levels of excitement 
! To have a decent robot story on Fimfic? Sirs, you may not have any idea, what excitement truly means 
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So... whenever you might want to use an editor
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All right! I'll ask for your help when I'll get something then!
And again, thanks for the feedback!
I don't think it's possible to describe how feedback motivates me to start writing a new chapter
it's a shame you cancelled this, it's a fun little story!
nice detail with the different settings on the inhibitor. it's not something i could've come up with
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Heh, thanks! Thought the inhibitor/LED was mostly borrowed from Detroit: Become Human and tweaked a bit.
And about cancellation: Well... I just didn't knew where to really take the story and I guess I have some ideas/scenes that I still want to do, but setting them up isn't easy.
So, apparently, it is really cancelled... And I've never got to edit...
There could have been a story... Oh, well. We'll remember what exists, still.
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Yeah, it's cancelled sadly
I didn't really had it fleshed out when I started writing and that became a problem