The Bond of the Princesses

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Remedyfortheheart

Remedyfortheheart #1 · May 7th, 2019 · · ·

Awww! Alright judging time!

Okay well, this piece was spectacular! It was nice light-hearted and stuck to the author's strengths. To which I could easily pick out your weakness and realized the wise choice of focusing on other traits of the story to accommodate said weakness. Well done. I thoroughly enjoyed this one it was very heartwarming while still somewhat trying to be a little spicy. My only thing to say that you could improve on is looking up on how to structure a story properly and watch your grammar a little. Grammar and spelling errors are minor, what is more, difficult is actually building the story and making it easy to read for your audience. So keep it up and let's see what else you can do in the future.

imsorrydad

imsorrydad #2 · May 19th, 2019 · 1 · 1 ·

I cant believe that am creating a fimfiction account two hours past midnight, just so I can leave a "hilarious" comment in some smutfic written for a MLP incest contest, like where the fuck did I go wrong. I should be sleeping or studying or doing whatever normal people do, not reading about characters from a childrens cartoon screwing each other, why the fuck am I like this . . .

That being said:

WE WILL WATCH YOUR CAREER WITH GREAT INTEREST.

Yumberduddle