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After The Snap - MLPFan9000

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After The Snap

Rainbow Dash is asleep. In her dreams a sped up times 1000 version of what happens in this story happens in her dreams. She has no idea what is going on. And then she wakes up. She hears a snap from far away and thinks nothing of it until what she witnesses. Meanwhile at Celestia's castle, ponies were disintegrating left and right. Princess Cadence was one of those ponies, and then Flurry Heart responds to this by saying the following.

"Mama?" She says, wondering what happened. Meanwhile Rainbow Dash turns on TV to see the news.

"Breaking News, m'kay? Daring Do has disappeared due to unknown reasons." Mr. Goodman says on the news, being the only human in Equestria.

"WHAT?" Rainbow Dash screams, right before she remembers hearing a snap. "Oh god, he did it... again." She said, terrified. Discord was eating popcorn seeing what Cheese Sandwich was up to and the said pony he was watching just disintegrated!

"Wait, what in the-?" But before he could finish his sentence, he felt weird. "Hmm, not the way I thought I would go." And then Discord was no more.

There were more ponies dying left and right. Bulk Biceps was disintegrated as well.

Rainbow Dash flew to her parents house, hoping they would be there.

"Honey, what's happening to me?" Boy hothoof said, before disintegrating himself.

"Hothoof? Where did you go?" Windy Whistles said and then her back felt weird. "Well, this feels... ...odd." She said, and then she was also no more. And that was when Rainbow Dash burst the door open.

"Mom? Dad?" Rainbow Dash said, before breaking into tears. "Why? Why? WHY?" She cried. "Wait, Tank!" She realized, and then she flew over to her own house. "Tank! Are you okay? Please don't leave me..." Rainbow Dash said, picking up her pet turtle and hugging it. "Please don't leave me." She said, before Tank disintegrated in her arms, giving Rainbow Dash a mental breakdown.

Toola Roola and Coconut Cream got disintegrated as well. Meanwhile, Rainbow Dash was flying some more, searching for Gilda.

"Gilda, Gilda! Where are you?" She said, just before she found her birded friend. "Oh Gilda, thank goodness you lived!" She said, in relief

"What do you mean?" Gilda said, before disintegrating in front of Dash.

"WHY? WHY DOES GOD ALLOW THIS TO HAPPEN? MOTHER OF CELESTIA!" Rainbow Dash screamed.

"Princess Cadence, where are you? CADENCE!!!!!" Prince Blueblood said, looking for Princess Cadence and then all of a sudden, he felt weird. "I feel awful..." And then he was gone.

"Bye, Diamond! Be good at school, okay?" Filthy Rich said.

"Yeah, be good." Spoiled Rich said.

"Okay, mom and dad!" Diamond Tiara said, as she left. "Bye!" She said. And then you know what happens next.

"My hooves, they feel weird!" Spoiled Rich said.

"Same!" Filthy Rich said. "In fact they are flaking off of my *yay*ing body! She added.

"Language!" Spoiled Rich commented. And then they disintegrated.

"I'm gonna make it to school before you, Silver!" Diamond Tiara said.

"No, i'll win this time!" Silver Spoon said, as she sees something interesting happen.

"Silver, I don't feel well, maybe i'm sick?" Diamond Tiara said, before she vanished from the snap.

"Diamond? Diamond? Where are you?" Silver Spoon asked.

As Pipsqueak and Rumble fade, we go to Twilight And Spike.

"Twilight?" Spike asked

"Yeah Spike?" Twilight responded.

"I-I don't feel so good..." Spike said.

"You're fine." Twilight said.

"I don't know what's happening to me... I don't know..." After Spike finished the sentence he grabs onto Twilight's leg.
"I don't wanna go, I don't wanna go, please help me..." Spike cried. "...……..I'm sorry...…….." Spike said, as he disintegrated as well.

"Spike? Spike? SPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIKE!!!!!!!!!!!!" Twilight says and screams. She looks at her hooves to make sure she doesn't disintegrate as well.

"Something's happening..." Gabby said, as she faded from existence.

"Apple bloom?" Babs seed said. "Remember me." And then Babs seed was disintegrating.

"Always." Apple Bloom whispered, before Babs seed's body was disintegrated

"Rarity, save me..." Sweetie Belle whimpered. "I Don't think I will survive..."

"I know the both of us will survive, I just know it!" Rarity responded, but she had just jinxed herself, as Sweetie Belle started disintegrating.

"Help..." Sweetie Belle whispered, before she finally faded.

"Sweetie Belle, No, No, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!" Rarity said and screamed before she started crying.

"Applejack." Apple Bloom said.

"What?" Applejack responded.

"...Babs seed, Gabby and Sweetie Belle d-died." Applebloom said, as she began tearing up.

"WHAT? WHY? HOW DI- wait Applebloom." Applejack said.

"Huh? What is it?" Applebloom asked

"You are disintegrating, I don't want to lose you!" Applejack said. Applebloom looked at her hooves.

"No, please no, I don't want to go, Applejack! Save me!" Applebloom then disintegrated.

"NOOOOOO!!!!!" Applejack yelled, and she tried to fix Sweetie Belle up but the dust flew out of her hand. "I couldn't save you, i'm sorry..." Applejack said.

"Scootaloo, Scootaloo, SCOOTALOO WHERE ARE YOU?" Rainbow Dash is flying around, looking desperately for Scootaloo, thinking of what might happen. Luckily, she finds Scootaloo who was also looking for her.

"Rainbow Dash? YOU LIVED?" Scootaloo said.

"I was gonna say the same to you, Scootaloo!" Rainbow Dash said, and then the two hugged in happiness. "Hey Scootaloo, how have you been handling the snap?" Rainbow Dash asked.

"Good, except for the fact that the rest of the CMC died!" Scootaloo responded, and her pet Kirby comes along.

"Well, you and Kirby are some good pony and uh...er… whatever Kirby is and I would have lost it if you two got snapped out of existence." Rainbow Dash said.

"Poyo! (You're right!)" Kirby said.

"Yeah Dash, it is good that we-" Scootaloo said, before being cut off by Rainbow Dash.

"Oh god no, please no! No, no no Please tell me i'm dreaming!" Rainbow Dash said, cutting Scootaloo off before she looks on her own hooves to see herself disintegrating

"N-no, I can't go, this can't be happening!" Scootaloo said, before hugging Rainbow Dash while crying. Rainbow Dash proceeded to hug back.

"Poyo po... (Don't leave me...)" Kirby said, in a sad tone

"Rainbow Dash, I love you." Scootaloo said, before she finally disintegrated. Rainbow Dash started crying and so did the Kirby. Rainbow Dash cried for 18 hours straight before crying at random moment for about an hour sessions of crying for the next month, 30 minute sessions for the next 4 weeks after that, 15 minute sessions for the next 2 weeks and 5 minute sessions for the next 3 weeks. Now at least once a week, Rainbow Dash will randomly cry for 3 minutes and this sticks to this day.

If only Thor would have aimed for the head.

Author's Note:

It was hard to pick out who would die and how i would reach 1,000 words but i did so, yeah. This marks the first (and most likely last) time that Scootaloo dies. Also, I made Twilight, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rarity, Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash all live in reference to the original 6 avengers (Captain America, Thor, Iron Man, Hulk, Black Widow and Hawkeye) Surviving the snap. Bye! Please no Avengers: Endgame Spoilers please!

Comments ( 33 )

... WHERE THE HELL DID KIRBY COME FROM!:rainbowhuh:

Dusty trail ...

One left...

But nobody came...

W H Y. . . ?

https://m.

Interesting

Comment posted by MLPFan9000 deleted Apr 27th, 2019

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Go read my other story, it'll give you an idea of where Kirby came from.

Thier lucky Luna is still left otherwise who would move the sun and moon, there is every chance there might not be enough powerful unicorns to do it

Read an article that with that snap there is a good chance at least on Earth that snap would end all life on Earth. Taking out 50% of a number of species would doom them immediately and that could cause an ecological collapse.

Comment posted by MLPFan9000 deleted Apr 28th, 2019

"I don't know what's happening to me... I don't know..." After Spike finished the sentence he grabs onto Twilight's leg. "I don't wanna go, I don't wanna go, please help me..." Spike cried. "...……..I'm sorry...…….." Spike said, as he disintegrated as well.

really really you put Spike as spider man?!!!

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Yes, I did. I couldn't think of anyone else for that except Scootaloo but I already had decided how she died so I made Spike be the one to die similarly to Spider-Man.

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please read my story the hybrid i would love a feed back

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Comment posted by red reaper deleted Dec 4th, 2019

Some part of me doesn't want to read this but the bigger, more obnoxious part is insisting on it. - This is idiotic and hilarious.

Comment posted by Peppermint N Swirl deleted Apr 27th, 2019

If only Thor would have aimed for the head.

:rainbowlaugh::raritycry::raritydespair::fluttershysad::applecry:

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Darth Vader is Luke's father and Princess Leia is Luke's sister.

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I already knew that

Comment posted by Grenas deleted Apr 27th, 2019
Comment posted by MLPFan9000 deleted Apr 27th, 2019

Not Aiming For The Head Results In Exactly In One Katillion Deaths By Dusting A Year Kids!

So remember the old Rhyme...

If You Wish To Not Be Dead.

Simply Chop Off The Head.

This PSA has been brought to you by A.A.S.S.

Avengers Against Sadistic Snapping.

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This is my favorite comment here, this comment you made
Stay Awesome

9591961
Awww! :heart:

I enjoyed the story, like just something totally off the wall lol.

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Congratulations! You've been invited to the A.S.S.! The Avengers Super Superheroes!

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Yes, I know. You're laughing because I made an acronym out of "ass".

Spike-der man! Spike-der man! Does whatever a Spike-der can! Thanos snaps! Then he dies! While Rainbow Dash just cries and cries! Look out! Here comes the Spike-der man...

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I see somebody's finally got why I chose Spike to die similar to Spider-Man. Good job!

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I just loved writing that comment. If you sing it out loud, it's all the more funny.

"Breaking News, m'kay? Daring Do has disappeared due to unknown reasons." Mr. Goodman says on the news, being the only human in Equestria.

I have no words

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Me neither, i am probably going to actually delete my story when it hits it's one year mark.

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As Pipsqueak and Rumble fade, we go to Twilight And Spike.

"Twilight?" Spike asked

"Yeah Spike?" Twilight responded.

"I-I don't feel so good..." Spike said.

"You're fine." Twilight said.

"I don't know what's happening to me... I don't know..." After Spike finished the sentence he grabs onto Twilight's leg.
"I don't wanna go, I don't wanna go, please help me..." Spike cried. "...……..I'm sorry...…….." Spike said, as he disintegrated as well.

"Spike? Spike? SPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIKE!!!!!!!!!!!!" Twilight says and screams. She looks at her hooves to make sure she doesn't disintegrate as well.

I'm very happy that someone sees Spike like Peter Parker. I really am.

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