...well, we can 404 the site now. Ain't no one gonna top that.
Also, no canned ravioli is worth prison, especially mass-market Chef Sort-Of-Red-Sauce, and so your plot is worthless. Now if it had been homemade tortellini...
Surprisingly catchy plot. I felt a real connection with the main character and his quest for self fulfilment. He obviously has a bit of a messed up pasta, but he pushed his pesto aside and stirs towards his dreams.
All in all I rate this a good 6,3 cans of ravioli out of 10.
...well, we can 404 the site now. Ain't no one gonna top that.
Also, no canned ravioli is worth prison, especially mass-market Chef Sort-Of-Red-Sauce, and so your plot is worthless. Now if it had been homemade tortellini...
this needs to go on the troll fic group lol
Surprisingly catchy plot. I felt a real connection with the main character and his quest for self fulfilment.
He obviously has a bit of a messed up pasta, but he pushed his pesto aside and stirs towards his dreams.
All in all I rate this a good 6,3 cans of ravioli out of 10.
Write more ravioli