A seemingly regular human was turned into a Nightmare from the game Heroes of Might & Magic 5, and then transported to Equestria at the time of Nightmare Moon's return. Soon, he finds himself in the whirlwind of unexpected events.
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Will Luna take control again
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Perhaps. Nightmare Moon plans to own a body of her own in the future...
So mutch different than your other version. I love em both. Hope both will be finished one day
Great chapter.
What now? Will Nightmare Moon play 'Lunas part' in the timeline? Nurture Andromalius knownlage in the meantime so he can defend himself and be of better use? Rally her forces to let em strike from the shadows to remove the molt of corruption from the heart of Equestria? Will she try to become Celestias equal to prove herself a better ruler later on? Hm...
What about Andromalius... Will he be used for a third time and thrown away ones he is no longer of use?
Will he perhaps be more than 'the demon'?! Perhaps in time they could become close enough so Andro cares for Nightmare. Be the first to care for her. Not her titel or powers. But as a individual. So when Nightmare leaves or loses Luna, Andro care for Nightmare Moons well being.
That will be a long way for Nightmare to earn it trough & it will be more complicated... If he protect her body from her enemys it will be because he cares for Luna.
Nightmare can only be polite towards him. Teach him and learn to understand him for his personality not his potencial... Using his Name would be a start.
I think i would have a routine roughly as follow:
Greet Nightmare Moon and Luna, ask how they both are (basicly light smalltalk like with a room mate ).
Ask Nightmare & Luna for advice for 'yxz' , learn of the world norms & since he is around ponys there culture.
Hmmm... an althernate take, I see. This will make a big detour until we can arrive at the beginning of the Nation Rising again.
Update day is ironic somewhat
More please also will nightmare moon have her own body after this also Will Luna x Ando is happened if it is please do it also fuck you celestia i hat her so much on this fic yes corruption on equestria is so bad that need to be stop by any mean necessary also will realiase that she being manipulate on the next chapter and what her reaction?
Also more please.
Well. That’s quite the twist compared to the original. I must congratulate ya on somehow making this work. I do hope NMM is actually the good one here. Kinda like ‘Seasons of Darkness’ another story I read way back when witch has died I feel.
Last chapter, Nightmare was a gloating, irrational and hateful bitch. Now she says she just wants to fix the world because she's so noble; not because she wants to conquer it and remake it in her image. That she's above the Pony Illuminati, despite already deceiving him twice in order to achieve her own ends (however desperate she might've been). It's her word against her actions.
On one hand, it's not like the protag had a choice. He was alone in the world, another country was set against him, and as any sane individual, he was supposed to look for a group that offered him the safety of numbers that he needed to survive.
On the other hand, the situation still sucks. But what are you going to do, in life you inevitably come across a bigger fish that you just have to deal with.
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when life hands you lemons, make lemonade. He made the best of a bad situation while not really explaining why he's in contact with a succubus. Nightmare moon taking over Luna put a stop to that. Not going to look good in celestia's eyes when she finds out though.
on anther note, not really helping your case nightmare moon when you use Andro twice against his wishes. I'm willing to give you the benefit of the doubt for now since you did vow to make a new body for luna. Also didn't feel like making another comment for this so decided to post this here.
*Fingers hammer*His face looks Squishy and vulnerable... perhaps add a few plates on the forehead, bridge of the nose, and cheek muscles? Maybe not cheek plates but eyebrow plates?
And the dices have been thrown.
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That would make sense and be more accurate to the artwork I got the idea from (i.e. copied for the most part), but let's say his skin is thick on the bridge of the muzzle, and his skull is even thicker, and leave it at that for now.
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Nightmare Moon is... interesting. One might argue she had no time to explain herself to Andromalius when they first "met"; after all, she needed the Bearers of the Elements of Harmony out of the picture. Besides, as said, she wasn't prepared for her return and, well, messed up. Then Luna's soul-consciousness-thing was torn into parts by the Elements (since they cannot remove things from existence or kill), so you end up with three pieces: Luna pre-NM, Nightmare Moon as a lingering part of when Luna became NM, and Nightmare Moon as a spirit haunting the abandoned castle. Luna wasn't too emotionally stable after the Elements, although her work helped her escape having to deal with it in depth.
Nightmare Moon, meanwhile had nowhere to go, barely a thing to do, and no one to turn to. Arguably, she got the worst of it since she didn't even have her own body. That would make anymore more than grumpy and irritated, especially since Nightmare Moon is somewhat less rational than Luna despite being committed to her cause much strongly.
As for Andromalius, he had a simple choice: escape things all the time, turn himself in and hope for a good treatment (which he had no reason to believe in), escape things for a while but listen to Inanna (who seemed more in it for his body than trying to help him), or trust Nightmare Moon. All options were pretty much crap, but he would rather have an uncertain ally than a few certain enemies.
Kind of a disappointing chapter. He would sacrifice the real Luna for this? Becoming stronger or not this will not turn out right and this guy does not even attempt to fight back. Even if everyone despises him, this choice will only cement their fears and thoughts of him se he very well may even become more feared then the nightmare. Unless he can change her mind or overpower her I don't see anything happening. His personality is just so timid.
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Andromalius used to be a regular guy before, don't forget that. A lot of people might think they would be heroes stopping all kinds of villainy, but history and the reality as a whole says otherwise. Andromalius is still largely untrained, so even if he did go against Nightmare Moon... how would he do it? For all he knew, fighting her would put Luna at risk as well. He doesn't know anything about exorcism either. And if he loses, or even lets Nightmare Moon retreat after the fight if he does manage to win, she could very well set Celestia against him, and at that point, he would have no allies, and he'd be trapped close to the middle of Equestria.
Overall, what he chose was the best decision he could make at the time. When he gains knowledge and power, as well as improved his character by perhaps honing the willpower and other noble aspects of a person, he would be able to do something different. When that happens, he may do what you suggest he should.
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Wait Wat no... question, are you a reader of the old version of the story or are you a new reader? I've read the old version so some story elements and characters are same or similar to ones from the old version, so I know about a few mentions made in this new version.
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Also ensures Doomguy doesnt go seeking them out for a 'party'
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Ah, yes. That too
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I'm a new reader, just finished up to current, so that statement is old.
I would make three demands for following:
- Luna is not to he harmed
- Andro shall receive education ( she offered anyway )
- hugs and treats for acomplisments
The situation changed drastically and I have no idea how I should feel for this sudden change, I mean I would think Andro would study at the abandoned castle until Luna found evidence of the conspirators, or at least until Twilight and the girls decide to explore the castle for some unknown reason... I know this is a remake but I feel there's a lot happening that I can't see a clear connection for... also, WHERE'S INANNA, THERE'S A LACK OF OUR FAVORITE SUCCUBUS IN THESE PAST CHAPTERS AND I WISH TO SEE MORE OF OUR SENSUAL, SEXUAL, ADORABLE SUCCUBUS MORE!