A seemingly regular human was turned into a Nightmare from the game Heroes of Might & Magic 5, and then transported to Equestria at the time of Nightmare Moon's return. Soon, he finds himself in the whirlwind of unexpected events.
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poor luna
WHY CAN'T I LIKE MORE THAN ONCE
Seems this new version follow the almost completely different route from the old one. Honestly, It would be interesting to see how it reach the conclusion.
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I decided to approach the story more seriously so that the characters become more relatable, believable, and well-rounded. I think this will end up well. Besides, it's just better to write the same story in a different way so that it's not a mindless rewrite with slightly better characterization and grammar but something more.
Your point about Celestia needing to have done more to prepare for Lunas return is quite a good one. It wasn't like the she didn't know it was going to happen, and the reaction of the populace is pretty much exactly what you'd expect unsee the circumstances. It seems like her immortality has given her something of a "if I just wait, it'll fix itself" approach to things.
Otherwise very solid work. The characters are shaping up nicely, the conversations flow naturally, the descriptions are good, and I'm looking forward to getting farther into things.
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Thank you! And yeah, I just had that sudden realization that Celestia knew about her sister's return but didn't do anything until it came. I mean, her sister turned into a legend, a myth. Sounds like a huge problem.
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It's a good thought, and one that probably deserves a bit more conversation in the story. Celestia isn't stupid, neither is Luna, and at some point Luna (and the readers) are going to get direly curious about why on earth Celestia failed to take any steps that would have made Luna's return easier. After all, they both know how well passive aggressively ignoring each other's problems worked out last time.
When can we approximately expect the next update?
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Unfortunately, I doubt I can say anything outside of "as soon as I get to it".
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It has been a month since the last update, but it finally arrives, and so does your answer! I've been writing this chapter for two days, and I finally got around to finishing it properly. I should apologize for such a big delay, but I had (and to some extent still have) personal matters I had to attend to. I hope you enjoy the update!
How mutch sleep did he need? What about food and Water?
dame it maybe if celestia don't spend all your time sitting on your ass eating cake and tutoring twilight you would of remember to paper your people for Luna's return I guess we can chop it up to you being lazy and think that there be no problem when Luna returned.
In canon, they had Nightmare Night to celebrate the dark and scary. It's also likely Celestia let the history of Nightmare Moon fade from memory so no one remembered the danger her sister put the world in. All that was left was an innocent child's cautionary tale of gealousy. They probably also played down her grand return.
Celestia would really need to drop the ball hard in order to let the Sacred Light cult to develop. I'd say this makes for an okay way to keep things interesting, but it still places the story firmly in the alt-universe category.
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Dame right Celestia haves be com complacent and laze also she’s got it in her head that any problems will fix there sells but in trousers it will only get worse.
Heres a good question though: Why are the demons in hiding? What's the story there?
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Demons tend to keep to themselves. So that's most likely why they aren't as well know and seen as legends.
Andro has 2 individuals to talk to. Only one can spare one the madness that waits for one in Isolation. How Nightmare Moon didnt get batshit crazy is still a mystery to me...
Dont Celestia owns Andro a big thanks? He never had to do a thing after all...
Okay, maybe Inanna ISN'T Celestia...
Ngl, this feels a bit too on-the-nose, even for me (and meta humor is my FAVORITE type of humor).
For some reason, my eyes did that thing were they skip a bunch of text and just land on a word. As I was reading, right after Luna and Celestia's talk, I scrolled down and landed on "Spank me?" and the little voice in my head just translated it as being Luna instead of Inanna.