A seemingly regular human was turned into a Nightmare from the game Heroes of Might & Magic 5, and then transported to Equestria at the time of Nightmare Moon's return. Soon, he finds himself in the whirlwind of unexpected events.
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So it doesnt matter if she didnt protect her subjects? Minor mistake here (i think). But it is an overall good chapter so keep up the good work!
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Hm, I meant the sentence to convey a different meaning. Changed "if" to "when".
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I already explained it, but in short, that description is there to show how slowly the time went for the main character.
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I wholeheartedly disagree. Right now, he's simply adjusting to a situation that is entirely foreign in each and every way. I'd imagine an average guy would have serious troubles with it, especially considering what was already shown. But in any case, it's going to change, of course. He can't stay like that forever.
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Thanks!
Celestia hopefully dont turn supernova on them...
I disagree with Luna it not her fault the guard was injured ponies that join the guards know what dangerous come with there line of work the only ones to blame are the ones responsible.
I just realized this but it sounds like the crystal empire
I personally like the older story I just can't seem to connect with this remake
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That's understandable. I'm going for a more serious tone this time, and a lot of things are different. But I'm glad you enjoyed the first version!
It seems both weird and reasonable that Luna is currently so emotionally fragile. The whole Nightmare thing and all that came with it, both cause and effect, would heavily effect mental state and stability. Not to mention the possibility of having been conscious for any portion of time on the moon, alone, and mentally damaged.
Andro is doing what Celestia can not ( i guess to bussy dealing with the aftermath? )
Not making a exampel via execution is creating a very dangerous precidense. There is mercy and there is stupidity...
One can only hope Celestia deals with this assasins on a permanent base. Tarterus at the very least.