A seemingly regular human was turned into a Nightmare from the game Heroes of Might & Magic 5, and then transported to Equestria at the time of Nightmare Moon's return. Soon, he finds himself in the whirlwind of unexpected events.
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well. you write lunaspeak better than i do, that's for sure. i tried but i just end up pounding my head against my desk in frustration...
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To be honest, it's pretty easy. Just look up the usage of thou, thee, thy, thine. Then add -st to present and past verbs associated with thou. Replace 3rd person -s ending of verbs with -th or -eth, and you're set. I did have some problems with it at first, but it's not really that difficult if you think about it. Good luck with your lunaspeak!
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Thank you for the update! Hope everything sorts its self out
I liked the original version of Andromalius better.
Will complex spells will be like programing?
Like in Doctor Strange?
"The language of the Mystic Arts is as old as civilization. The sorcerers of antiquity called the use of this language "spells", but if that word offends your modern sensibilities, you can call it a "program"; the source code that shapes reality. We harness energy drawn from other dimensions of the Multiverse to cast spells, to conjure shields and weapons, to make magic!"
Doctor Strange (Ancient One to Strange)
So if someone is proven guilty for murder with a hand they had it cut off?
That law sounds like from medieval times, I think this is outdated law that changed and Luna doesn't know it.
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I think that law is akin to forbidding someone to own a gun. In this case, this gun is attached to their forehead. But it could also be an outdated law because, no matter how you look at it, mutilating someone for a crime is pretty disturbing. Although, in some cases, it can still be justified.
Anyway, using magical spells is indeed like programming. The story will go more in-depth later on about it.
I just realized this but o boy I wundr how meeting blue blood will go.
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I know that thou, thee, thy, and thine, replaces you, your, and yours; but I know that you, your, and yours, come into play too. I'm not good at ye olden speech, but did the rules for you, your, and yours, not come into play? Or did you forgot about it? Because I noticed none of those three words were in Luna's dialog.
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I don't think she ever had to speak them. In my other stories, I used it, but here, I just didn't find the proper situation to do it.
Cool Luna is speaking olden speak, but from a story perspective it’s going to get repetitive and don’t show any character development - especially for characters that were temporally displaced - so I hope there a certain part of the story that Luna gets language lessons to speak the modern dialect.
So far loving the story, good work.
Odd i never comment on this chapter
5 spells would be my priority:
-Cutting spell ( for Utility in general & attack )
-Healing/restoration ( on myself or others, ideal both )
-Shield ( magic primary since his body already has natural armor )
-Stun / sleep spell ( non lethal offense )
-Light spell ( very useful spell for many useful thing from everyday use to combat or distractions )
Luna seem to need a hug or two... Perhaps a boop on the snoot for silly moment stress release?