A seemingly regular human was turned into a Nightmare from the game Heroes of Might & Magic 5, and then transported to Equestria at the time of Nightmare Moon's return. Soon, he finds himself in the whirlwind of unexpected events.
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in his defense, if he listened to the succubus pony then Luna would've probably had some help with her heat when it occurred.
This alone could probably diffuse nightmare moon processed Luna from attacking him based on how awkward it is alone and led to some time to explain himself.
Anything not making not making a processed Luna enraged could only help his situation and led to him not getting his ass handed to him.
Pretty sure this Nightmare is a fake.
Why is it so bad he had moral support of someone else? Luna of all should know how one grasp at every straw if trown into a world unknown to one. He has his body changed and might died without his demonic aid. If anything Luna probably will distrust Nightmare action and win our poor Andro more trust.
Lets count:
He saved her life, spared her assasins, hes saved a critical injured defender of the Lunar diarch, he befriended her, who ever is after her used corrupted guard to get rid of her friend and guardian by getting him on Celestias bad side.
Cant think of a real reason Luna would misstrust Andro. Maybe she would be dissapointed he didnt trust her but he risk his life for her and she left him to Celestias missguided wrath!
Luna will hopefully get some nice informations out of the corrupted guard. Celestia will probably be shocked to learn she let herself get used like a puppet. Celestia can argue how she wannt but its a fact he saved her sister and is now potencialy killed by her for getting tricked.
Celestia orders the execution of a inicent. If she cant accept this simpel truth than she is no better than the Nobels using her.
Nice to see a update. Hope you stay save in this health crisis we are told be in.
How many Guard do Luna has? She need at the very least 12 as i see it. 4 Guarding the prisoner plus shift release and 4 for a strike team or errants to run.
Glad to see another update after so long hope to keep seeing updates.
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Luna's situation with her nightmare mirroring that of Celestia who is already giving in to her nightmare, except Luna and Nightmare both know where that path leads which means Nightmare moon was going to need more than words to convince Luna thus this is just an attempt to show Luna that she was right which could create a way for her to take over Luna again.
It also works to show that alicorns can be corrupted by nightmare versions of themselves and this wasn't Luna over-reacting or favoring Andro due to him being her friend.
Oh yay, great. A cliffhanger. My fucking favorite.
I have no idea why people keep ending their chapters with them. They're not clever, they don't offer anything to the story, all they do is make the reader want to click next. As if the reader doesn't have better use for the brain cells unwantedly dedicated to keeping tabs for another month or so.
I'm not done griping, this recurring fuckery is really annoying to me, but I should try make my criticism constructive. The way you end a chapter/arc/story is on a question, not on a cliffhanger. You present what the characters have to resolve and figure out moving forward. You need to keep the reader's interest as a two-way dialogue, not by dragging him forcefully by the arm.
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Oh crap, I didn't even realize I ended it on a cliffhanger, a thing that I also happen to dislike. Big whooooops.
I think I just got tired when I finished the chapter and didn't really think of it. After all, I wanted to publish at least something. Well, then I suppose I need to continue writing as soon as I can because cliffhangers are pretty awful.
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Im fine with it. Keep us at the edge of creativity.
Loved the chapter. I wonder what Celestia will do when she realised she been played to chase away Lunas best protector beside her loyal personal guards.
well shit what did nightmare show Luna
Yeah I got some questions, how come a remnant of Nightmare Moon still exists, because if a piece of her did survive, I doubt she had this much power to manipulate three beings into sharing the same mind - especially if one's an alicorn, one's a demon who was sealed in some faraway unknown location, while another is some entity who isn't sure what he is and has some unknown powerful abilities - would be a big hassle and power drain... there's to many inconsistencies in this one moment within the chapter, I mean it make sense if NM's remnant were effecting Andro but to also catch Luna off-guard and drag Inanna from Hell - a place that I'm pretty certain has its own magical safe-guards place to keep anyone from finding or releasing any of its residents free, whether physically or spiritually - is a tad overpowered for a simple remnant... There's just too many things happening that's contradictory to what we know so far and that's NM should be gone and if she did manage to survive, would be too weak to make any comeback, at best it would take a few years not several months.
Oh well, so far this has got be confused but intrigued so onward to more mysteries to be solved and more chapters to be read.
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It's not really that difficult if you're talking about dreams and such. It's the domain of Nightmare Moon as well as Luna. The remnant of Nightmare Moon is still reasonably strong in that regard.
Again, no physical dragging took place, only dream magic. That's also why Inanna was able to communicate with Andromalius from Hell - she didn't need to be physically present outside of it.