A seemingly regular human was turned into a Nightmare from the game Heroes of Might & Magic 5, and then transported to Equestria at the time of Nightmare Moon's return. Soon, he finds himself in the whirlwind of unexpected events.
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Looking forward to see some nobles 'swinging'.
you have a tough battle ahead of you luna, mommy celestia isn't going to believe the childish nobles could do any wrong.
At this point, I don't see how Andromalius could become an OP he was portrayed in the original story - let alone fighting to protect himself. And Celestia fell to the lie too easily. Has she thought for a moment how can a suspecting character (I am certain everypony in the castle wary of him) can reach the forbidden archive without being seen or stop along the way? When someone suspicious is inside your own home, there is no way you would let that person roam free without supervision. She should question how could her guards let such pony to reach within 100 trots of such area in the first place.
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She was biased against Andromalius in the first place, so some things missed her. In any case, she can sum it up to "He used magic on the guards". After all, he was learning battle magic, and there is some natural fire magic he can use. While it's a stretch, Celestia can assume he knows magic that can influence minds. Even if she doesn't make that conclusion, I know from experience that people want to believe their own bullshit despite the evidence to the contrary, and the conspirators had a thousand years to influence Celestia that way.
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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Hm, I believe you asked me that question on my other fic. In any case, Andromalius would have a deep, rumbling voice with a hint of his origins, i.e. some remains of teenage awkwardness. Inanna would have a sexy voice, being a succubus and all.
Wooohooo for the guards and elements, the hunt is on outside. Lunas hunt is on the inside, Create the inquisition! X3
Thanks for the chapter ^_^.
Celestia is need to stop also for andromelis he need to go to his kingdom on hell to united demon tribe also for vampire they could be allied.
Celestia is taking this to easy and so on Luna just try teach him how to use magic defense and offense celestia is so fucking paranoid.
Also more please
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Is andromelis is being Set up by celestia court or by princess itself also will he unite demon tribe to be a single kingdom.
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That's not it at all. I suppose only the next chapter will make some problematic things clearer.
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All I can say right now is Luna isn't going to simply allow Andromalius to be killed. She decided to go along the route of "a demon made me do what I did, I was fooled by him", but that doesn't mean she will just abandon him to possible death. After all, she wants it to seem like she was under his influence, but, well, she was thinking on her own this whole time. Maybe I should've included it in the current chapter, but that would somewhat break the flow, so I'm going to write about it in the next one. Sorry for the confusion.
And with this story you have gotten to my top 25 writers.
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Thank you! I might reach top 1 someday
Is Luna still his mother
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Cover that in spoilers. And yes, she is.
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Luna: Andromalius, I am your mother!
Andromalius: Th-that's not possible, there's no way that can be true!
I'm sorry I had to.
Wow. That was great
Really I don't know what these six nobles families' plan were, they're not immortal and I doubt their descendants will have the same thoughts or ideas in the future as they. They messed up with trying to manipulate an immortal like Luna, prepare to face the wrath of the night princess fools!
Celestia cant be that incompetent... Luna should have step up! Luna & Andro were attacked to be assasinated!
Who would'nt want learn magic for self defense?!
Very dissapointing to see Luna played so easy and Celestia not even suspecting foul play!!!
If this was a meme:
RUN
I feel like in this new Rewrite Andromalius is an imbecile plain and simple. If you compared Old Andromalius vs New Andromalius, the new one would get violated in an instant.