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Lachlan Templar
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My thoughts-
Whatever the reason,
Her heart or her parties,
She stood there on Christmas Eve,
hating the ponies.
- Christmas. I am now 90% sure for ponies it's that Hearth Warming.
Why, for fifty-three years
I've put up with it now!
I MUST stop this Christmas from coming!
. . . But HOW?
- 53 years? Gilda is that old?
So she called her tortoise, Tank.
Then she took some red thread
And she tied a big horn
on top of his head.
- Tank belongs to Rainbow Dash, so unless she stole him...
She turned around fast,
and she saw a small pony!
Filly Scootaloo,
who was not more than two.
- Scootaloo is way older than two. At least 8 or 10.
Three thousand feet up!
Up the side of Mt. Crumpit,
She rode with her load
to the tiptop to dump it!
- Where is Mt. Crumpit, again?
And she brought back the toys!
And the food for the feast!
And she...
. . . SHE HERSELF . . . !
Gilda carved
the cake feast!
- She is that easily accepted back by the ponies?
I'm sorry. I know what you were going for. It's just when things don't add up they bother me. Ignoring me, I'd say Excellent job, old chap!
Well, for basically ripping the text off from Dr. Seuss
and changing key words to fit the pony version, this isn't bad.
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Yeah, some things don't add up. However, this was done entirely for the puns and the fact that Gilda and the Grinch are so alike.
If I changed much more I was afraid I would ruin the nostalgic value of such a classic story.
I don't claim these lines as my genius, all credit goes to Dr. Seuss.
I just added ponies.
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I was afraid that if I changed too much it would ruin the nostalgic value of the story.
I just hope you got some joy out of this, I am not claiming this work as my own...