• Member Since 25th May, 2018
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Xavier271


I love Flutterdash, best ponies, best ship.

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Fluttershy had hated herself for a long time, so one night she tries to end it all, but it doesn't go anywhere near as she planned.

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And what does Discord have to say about all of this?

9484653
I'll say he's the worst friend Fluttershy could have. Not appearing next to Fluttershy when she was in the hospital? Not there when Fluttershy needed comfort? Unless this was before season 2. Then that would be reasonable.

Story is a little short for all the information it contains, and could use a good polish with the editing cloth.

9484653
Ill be honest i forgot about him when writing this story, part of that might be because i dont personally like him very much.


9484686
Thanks for taking the time to read and the criticism, ill keep it in mind for next time.

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